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Borred as Fcuk.. 4 AM, Drop feed please |
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mad random but w.e.
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her skin looks a bit too fake.
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![]() 사랑해 ~ 我愛你 ♥ ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Design Staff Posts: 825 Joined: Jan 2007 Member No: 492,587 ![]() |
Image has been deleted..?
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![]() /人◕‿‿◕人\ ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Official Member Posts: 8,283 Joined: Dec 2007 Member No: 602,927 ![]() |
imo shit
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#6
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I 100% second Mike's response. Those silhouette backgrounds are so overdone. There's a lot going on in her bikini and with all that's going on in the background makes it too busy. Tone down the effects a bit.
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#7
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I think you should use a totally different background.
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#8
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haha funny since all that shyt that u pointed out being wrong ... was all part of the b.g. which was one layer that i foudn as a stock lol... at 4 am u expect me 2 make any of that shyt lol all i did was throw on a render, a couple gradient maps, and sum text.... critique the shyt i did . . and i know the text is bad lol im never good with typography
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![]() show me a garden thats bursting to life ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 12,303 Joined: Mar 2005 Member No: 115,987 ![]() |
All the more reason why you should sleep at 4AM; your judgment is totally impaired. You picked a horribly low quality "stock" background, which of course we expected you to have made it since your claiming it to be your creation, with lack of credit, and combined bad and bad to only create worse.
Sleep at 4AM, practice during the day when you're semi coherent. That is my critique and what I recommend. |
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#11
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Maybe subliminal sleeps in the daytime and he's a nocturnal person?
![]() Idk, it is common sense to have enough energy to do an activity ( yeah, graphic designing is an activity xD ) And one way way to improve and sharpen your designs is by examining pictures you like by other designers. you can even ask them how they did it if it makes you feel better. oh, and also try to look at tutorials and guides on certain effects and experiment around. i highly recommend looking through font guides / what to do & what not to do, etc. |
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haha 4got . . . can only post up work here that ive actually put time into lol . . . shyt was not serious or 4 a client... relax lol
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#13
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You should still give credit, because sometimes designers can be a bit...bitchy.
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Sooo, pretty much you didn't do anything. And the 1-2 things you did do look terrible. And would you stop saying 'shyt.' It's not a word.
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#19
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Damn, she's a giant. Look at how much bigger she is than that shitty looking tree.
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This is probably just my warped logic, but when you know what you're doing when you're coherent, then when you're semi/not coherent that really allows your mind to soar. You already have the skills to where you can do whatever. Kind of like you have to know the rules of art to break them? But when you don't know what you're doing and you're attempting to do it when you're not coherent, crap will be made because you didn't know what you were doing in the first place.
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Wow. You're all assholes.
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#23
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![]() poison ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Official Member Posts: 4,806 Joined: Mar 2008 Member No: 629,020 ![]() |
no really, some of you aren't event critiquing. You're just being downright rude and disrespectful. And if you think that i'm wrong then you're idiots. I'm sure none of you wouldn't like it if i said "wow it sucks, it looks like shit" when i critiqued some of your bad work.
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#24
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![]() I'm Jc ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Mentor Posts: 13,619 Joined: Jul 2006 Member No: 437,556 ![]() |
mike vs natalie
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![]() poison ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Official Member Posts: 4,806 Joined: Mar 2008 Member No: 629,020 ![]() |
Yeah he asked for feedback, you guys aren't even giving feedback you're just being complete pricks.
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