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Borred as Fcuk.. 4 AM, Drop feed please
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deteam
post Jan 21 2010, 01:56 PM
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mad random but w.e.



Leave Feedback / what i should do with this shyt

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post Jan 21 2010, 02:17 PM
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her skin looks a bit too fake.
 
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post Jan 21 2010, 04:11 PM
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Image has been deleted..?
 
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post Jan 21 2010, 06:20 PM
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QUOTE(elletricity @ Jan 21 2010, 04:11 PM) *
Image has been deleted..?



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post Jan 21 2010, 10:28 PM
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imo shit
 
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post Jan 21 2010, 11:00 PM
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I 100% second Mike's response. Those silhouette backgrounds are so overdone. There's a lot going on in her bikini and with all that's going on in the background makes it too busy. Tone down the effects a bit.
 
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post Jan 21 2010, 11:22 PM
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I think you should use a totally different background.
 
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post Jan 21 2010, 11:39 PM
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haha funny since all that shyt that u pointed out being wrong ... was all part of the b.g. which was one layer that i foudn as a stock lol... at 4 am u expect me 2 make any of that shyt lol all i did was throw on a render, a couple gradient maps, and sum text.... critique the shyt i did . . and i know the text is bad lol im never good with typography

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post Jan 22 2010, 02:13 AM
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All the more reason why you should sleep at 4AM; your judgment is totally impaired. You picked a horribly low quality "stock" background, which of course we expected you to have made it since your claiming it to be your creation, with lack of credit, and combined bad and bad to only create worse.

Sleep at 4AM, practice during the day when you're semi coherent. That is my critique and what I recommend.
 
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post Jan 22 2010, 11:46 AM
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QUOTE(technicolour @ Jan 22 2010, 02:13 AM) *
Sleep at 4AM, practice during the day when you're semi coherent. That is my critique and what I recommend.


Naw. I say, stay up; subliminal creativity will occur.
 
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post Jan 22 2010, 11:58 AM
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Maybe subliminal sleeps in the daytime and he's a nocturnal person? _unsure.gif

Idk, it is common sense to have enough energy to do an activity ( yeah, graphic designing is an activity xD )

And one way way to improve and sharpen your designs is by examining pictures you like by other designers. you can even ask them how they did it if it makes you feel better. oh, and also try to look at tutorials and guides on certain effects and experiment around. i highly recommend looking through font guides / what to do & what not to do, etc.
 
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post Jan 22 2010, 01:44 PM
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haha 4got . . . can only post up work here that ive actually put time into lol . . . shyt was not serious or 4 a client... relax lol shifty.gif

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post Jan 22 2010, 02:03 PM
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You should still give credit, because sometimes designers can be a bit...bitchy.
 
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post Jan 22 2010, 04:21 PM
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Sooo, pretty much you didn't do anything. And the 1-2 things you did do look terrible. And would you stop saying 'shyt.' It's not a word.
 
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post Jan 22 2010, 04:50 PM
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QUOTE(Maccabee @ Jan 22 2010, 04:21 PM) *
Sooo, pretty much you didn't do anything. And the 1-2 things you did do look terrible. And would you stop saying 'shyt.' It's not a word.





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post Jan 22 2010, 04:52 PM
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post Jan 22 2010, 05:43 PM
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QUOTE(mipadi @ Jan 22 2010, 10:46 AM) *
Naw. I say, stay up; subliminal creativity will occur.



To those who know what they're doing to begin with. I made my current wallpaper at 2 in the morning and I freaking love it so, *shrug*.
 
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post Jan 22 2010, 06:06 PM
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QUOTE(technicolour @ Jan 22 2010, 05:43 PM) *
To those who know what they're doing to begin with. I made my current wallpaper at 2 in the morning and I freaking love it so, *shrug*.



and we love you 2 shifty.gif

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post Jan 22 2010, 08:42 PM
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Damn, she's a giant. Look at how much bigger she is than that shitty looking tree.
 
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post Jan 23 2010, 12:44 PM
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This is probably just my warped logic, but when you know what you're doing when you're coherent, then when you're semi/not coherent that really allows your mind to soar. You already have the skills to where you can do whatever. Kind of like you have to know the rules of art to break them? But when you don't know what you're doing and you're attempting to do it when you're not coherent, crap will be made because you didn't know what you were doing in the first place.




And yes, everyone does love me. rolleyes.gif Note the witty sarcasm.
 
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post Jan 24 2010, 01:38 AM
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Wow. You're all assholes.
 
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post Jan 24 2010, 11:21 AM
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QUOTE(Tomates @ Jan 24 2010, 01:38 AM) *
Wow. You're all assholes.

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post Jan 24 2010, 12:03 PM
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no really, some of you aren't event critiquing. You're just being downright rude and disrespectful. And if you think that i'm wrong then you're idiots. I'm sure none of you wouldn't like it if i said "wow it sucks, it looks like shit" when i critiqued some of your bad work.
 
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post Jan 24 2010, 12:45 PM
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mike vs natalie

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post Jan 24 2010, 01:57 PM
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Yeah he asked for feedback, you guys aren't even giving feedback you're just being complete pricks.
 

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