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			  Jun 7 2009, 09:14 PM
			
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        			 Newbie ![]() Group: Member Posts: 2 Joined: Jun 2005 Member No: 150,292  | 
       
			
			 
				This obviously isn't the correct way to introduce myself, but I've been a part of Createblog for a few years, and this is my first post. 
			
			
					
		I made this header for a xanga layout I was planning on making, however I need some critiques before going through with it. It's also the first header I've made. ![]() Help? Thanks (=  | 
	
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			  Jun 7 2009, 09:20 PM
			
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					![]() Senior Member ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Administrator Posts: 8,629 Joined: Jan 2007 Member No: 498,468  | 
       
			
			 
				Tbh, the idea's nice but I'm not feeling the borders you used for your image. And I would have done some editing to the images. :/ That's just my opinion though.
				
				
				
			 
			
			
					
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			  Jun 7 2009, 09:27 PM
			
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					 Senior Member ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Human Posts: 525 Joined: Nov 2008 Member No: 695,913  | 
       
			
			 Tbh, the idea's nice but I'm not feeling the borders you used for your image. And I would have done some editing to the images. :/ That's just my opinion though. agree but i think the borders are ok just need to be cleaned up a little . . Keep it up Stay Up -1- Subliminal  | 
	
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			  Jun 7 2009, 09:37 PM
			
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					 Irrisistable Cabbages. ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 549 Joined: Nov 2007 Member No: 589,355  | 
       
			
			 
				I like the idea but I think it's a little big, imo. Unless your going to size it down on your actual layout, I don't know. But that's just my opinion. 
			
			
					
		Other than that, I like it(:  | 
	
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			  Jun 7 2009, 10:01 PM
			
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					![]() kthxbai ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Official Designer Posts: 2,832 Joined: Feb 2008 Member No: 621,203  | 
       
			
			 
				The left side appears to have more weight than the right side. If you put that on top of a blog, it would look imbalanced, in my opinion. 
			
			
					
		I think it would look better if you moved the image that is currently in the top right and put it in the bottom right. Also, I think the borders need to be more clean, not all over the place like they are now. Some spots in the border have white showing through, and I think it would look better if that was covered up.  | 
	
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			  Jun 7 2009, 11:22 PM
			
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					![]() Mel Blanc was allergic to carrots. ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Official Designer Posts: 6,371 Joined: Aug 2008 Member No: 676,291  | 
       
			
			 
				Yeah, some editing to the images would be nice and maybe even a grungy sort of texture on the images would look good. And I agree, clean up those borders some and it'll be lookin nioce.  
			
			
					
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