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 Apr 12 2009, 09:55 PM
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Some dude was making a cover 4 this dude and i said it sucked and he said fine id like to see what you can make so here you go i made this . . although its not gunna be used by the person . . . i would like to finish it up for my own personal profile so any tips would be appreciated . . .
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Apr 12 2009, 10:01 PM
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Um...can we see the original pictures that you used?
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Apr 12 2009, 10:09 PM
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ya since it aint being used 4 anything it didnt really matter to me that the stock i used with the planets and shyt was off lol . . one major critique im getting is 2 blend the text better . . . any ideas guys ?
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Apr 12 2009, 10:11 PM
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Well I think the text is fine but if it really bothers you why not change the color? Instead of white use one that's closer to the background?
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Apr 12 2009, 10:11 PM
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 Sex, Blood, & RocknRoll Group: People Staff Posts: 5,305 Joined: Nov 2007 Member No: 596,480 |
The only thing
I don't like is the white text, I think better fonts could be used. Except for "the blackout ep" that one looks ok. Really great job on the fire text. :D |
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Apr 12 2009, 11:11 PM
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Yeah I don't really like the black & white text. Or the font. I know it's your style but it should match the graphic, you know? It's pretty good though.
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Apr 12 2009, 11:28 PM
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 Mel Blanc was allergic to carrots. Group: Official Designer Posts: 6,371 Joined: Aug 2008 Member No: 676,291 |
I pretty much agree with everyone else. The white text is really the only thing that bugs me. Maybe you should kind of lower the text opacity a bit and a font change could be nice too. Although, I think the "Blackout EP" text is fine. I really like the graphic as well. Nice job.
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Apr 13 2009, 09:45 AM
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soo any font ideas ? lol are maybe even sections u think i should look under at www.dafont.com . . . let me know cuz liek i said even though this aint being used by the client id still like to fix it up a little . .
and wat font should be changed exactly the one thats on fire ? . . . or the other minor ones >? Stay Up -1- Subliminal |
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Apr 13 2009, 01:15 PM
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What does the other guy's design look like? Even though I don't know what it looks like, I wouldn't be flat out telling people their stuff sucks. Yours isn't bad, but it's no prize peach either.
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Apr 13 2009, 06:46 PM
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QUOTE(schizo @ Apr 13 2009, 02:15 PM)  What does the other guy's design look like? Even though I don't know what it looks like, I wouldn't be flat out telling people their stuff sucks. Yours isn't bad, but it's no prize peach either. lol so about answering my question about the fonts  Stay Up -1- Subliminal |
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Apr 13 2009, 07:51 PM
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You asked for general feedback in your first post and I gave it to you. So what about answering my question about what the other guy's looked like?
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Apr 13 2009, 07:55 PM
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Mel Blanc was allergic to carrots. Group: Official Designer Posts: 6,371 Joined: Aug 2008 Member No: 676,291 |
QUOTE(schizo @ Apr 13 2009, 08:51 PM) You asked for general feedback in your first post and I gave it to you. So what about answering my question about what the other guy's looked like? 
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Apr 13 2009, 09:49 PM
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QUOTE(schizo @ Apr 13 2009, 08:51 PM) You asked for general feedback in your first post and I gave it to you. So what about answering my question about what the other guy's looked like? that's like 2 people vectoring the same image . . . obviously there's similarities but obviously there's differences . . .now about that font Stay Up -1- Subliminal |
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Apr 14 2009, 08:36 PM
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Mel Blanc was allergic to carrots. Group: Official Designer Posts: 6,371 Joined: Aug 2008 Member No: 676,291 |
I'll just say Century Gothic or you could look up fonts at DaFont.com that are under the Eroded catergory.
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