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synatribe
post Mar 1 2009, 09:39 PM
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ehh, it needs something, what color do you like the best?

 
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post Mar 1 2009, 09:42 PM
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QUOTE(divergent @ Mar 1 2009, 09:41 PM) *
It looks nice, I think it'd look better if it was a full circle.

like into the "a"'s thanks btw :]
 
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post Mar 1 2009, 09:43 PM
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I Think I like the last the best. I has a black and gold feel. If not that one then the 1st one, but I like the 2nd one a little too.
 
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post Mar 1 2009, 09:43 PM
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Brng lara farther right. Maybe put the circle over the first a.
And bring both words closer together and the active lifestyle farther left.
And make some definition between l and R. If thats what it is.
 
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post Mar 1 2009, 09:45 PM
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QUOTE(IWontRapeYou @ Mar 1 2009, 09:43 PM) *
I Think I like the last the best. I has a black and gold feel. If not that one then the 1st one, but I like the 2nd one a little too.


thanks :]
QUOTE(jcp @ Mar 1 2009, 09:43 PM) *
Brng lara farther right. Maybe put the circle over the first a.
And bring both words closer together and the active lifestyle farther left.
And make some definition between l and R. If thats what it is.

hmm the circle in the "a" looks really awkward though
 
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post Mar 1 2009, 09:48 PM
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I think the first one's fine.
 
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post Mar 1 2009, 09:54 PM
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I like the first one. But then again I'm a girl so it's typical of me to say that lol.
 
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post Mar 1 2009, 09:57 PM
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QUOTE(manny-the-dino @ Mar 1 2009, 09:54 PM) *
I like the first one. But then again I'm a girl so it's typical of me to say that lol.

haha lol, I have a lot of "chic" or "girly" clients that I need to finish, it's so weird why they choose me?
 
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post Mar 1 2009, 09:58 PM
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I agree, slid lara over a bit more and I like the first one and the second one. Something about the whole thing seems awkward though. I think it's the O, it seems to condense.
 
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post Mar 1 2009, 09:58 PM
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I think the second would be best for both sexes. haha.
And it looks more logo like.
 
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post Mar 1 2009, 09:59 PM
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QUOTE(1angel3 @ Mar 1 2009, 09:58 PM) *
I agree, slid lara over a bit more and I like the first one and the second one. Something about the whole thing seems awkward though. I think it's the O, it seems to condense.

yea, Im thinking about moving the LR in the O over to the lara side a bit :]
 
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post Mar 1 2009, 10:01 PM
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QUOTE(Aberisk @ Mar 1 2009, 06:57 PM) *
haha lol, I have a lot of "chic" or "girly" clients that I need to finish, it's so weird why they choose me?

Haha I guess they just like how you design.

And yeah, move "Lara" over.
 
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post Mar 1 2009, 10:13 PM
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I quite like it so far... I'm just really annoyed with how close LR and fashion are. I know you're trying to keep LR in the middle of the oval and the 'a's at the sides of the oval, but it's really awkward how close they are.
 
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post Mar 1 2009, 10:34 PM
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I love the colors and fonts used. But I agree with Joanne; the distance between the "LR" and "fashion" bothers me.
 
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post Mar 1 2009, 10:36 PM
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yea, i think Im going to mess around with it a bit :] thanks guys :]
 
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post Mar 1 2009, 10:46 PM
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Everyone practically said what I was going to say but yeah, move "Lara" a bit more to the right as well with "Fashion". Move "active lifestyle" a bit to the left and maybe space the L and R. Also, I think maybe a little curved line inside the space of the "a" as well as the other "a" could make it a bit better, like Thomas said about the complete circle because I think the complete circle would look nice. As for the ones that you already made, I prefer the last one. Otherwise, nice job. thumbsup.gif
 
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post Mar 2 2009, 12:36 AM
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first one (: the logo in the middle seems too far over. but that's what everyone else said lol.
 
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post Mar 2 2009, 12:43 AM
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this is the final version (that they wanted)

1. wanted LARA bolder and capitalized
2. color choices by them
3. I move fashion over a bit
4. Wanted some empty space between where the circle and letters meet :]
 
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post Mar 2 2009, 01:08 AM
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haha i know, its close enough :]
 
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post Mar 2 2009, 07:50 PM
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If your clients like it then it's perfect.
 
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post Mar 2 2009, 08:33 PM
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i like the bottom left one
 
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post Mar 2 2009, 10:06 PM
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i think it would've looked nicer if the brown was black or dark gray, but it works.
 

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