KILL ME NOW!, im bored havent written in ages |
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 Feb 18 2009, 05:38 PM
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*Influential Guitarist & Inspiring Writer*  Group: Official Member Posts: 1,217 Joined: Sep 2004 Member No: 51,134  |
I hear your voice and the silent scream that echoes in my head
watching the painful memories that play while I sleep why'd you leave? a question left without an answer to give a scar that remains, no cure for as long as I live I'm scared to sleep, scared to close my eyes scared to death that I'll have to see you die again and again the pain that never leaves my side so no matter how hard I try, or the tears that I've cried you'll haunt me wherever I go, when I'm asleep or awake a nightmare thats living and walking for my life to take I feel like I'm already dead, is this what happened to you? a death so slow and agonizing, the experience you'll put me through KILLL MEE NOWWWWWWWWW!!! |
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Feb 18 2009, 06:09 PM
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Member Group: Duplicate Posts: 11 Joined: Feb 2009 Member No: 715,170 |
What the hell?
You are amazing. 
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Feb 18 2009, 08:11 PM
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 omnomnom Group: Member Posts: 1,776 Joined: Jul 2005 Member No: 180,688 |
amazing?
this is shit. |
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Feb 18 2009, 08:55 PM
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 kthxbai Group: Official Designer Posts: 2,832 Joined: Feb 2008 Member No: 621,203 |
QUOTE(dispn0ygonekrazy @ Feb 18 2009, 04:38 PM)  a nightmare thats living and walking? for my life to take Your poem was VERY good, but this line confused me. Incorrect word choice? |
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Feb 18 2009, 10:33 PM
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*Influential Guitarist & Inspiring Writer* Group: Official Member Posts: 1,217 Joined: Sep 2004 Member No: 51,134 |
haha I was just messing around with the words. no need to hate cocoshit
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Feb 18 2009, 10:44 PM
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QUOTE(dispn0ygonekrazy @ Feb 18 2009, 07:33 PM) cocoshit rofl |
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Feb 19 2009, 12:56 AM
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 f your couch Group: Official Member Posts: 3,089 Joined: Dec 2006 Member No: 491,301 |
^ hah! i spit on my screen laughing at that.
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Mar 17 2009, 05:51 PM
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 Senior Member Group: Official Member Posts: 5,166 Joined: Oct 2007 Member No: 585,858 |
QUOTE(coconutter @ Feb 18 2009, 09:11 PM) amazing? this is shit.  niice.. HAHAHA |
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