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post Feb 20 2008, 09:17 AM
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collage style. But I'm not feeling this piece. Something about it makes me hate it.

http://fragmentx.deviantart.com/art/Michael-Buble-77892151
 
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post Feb 20 2008, 10:57 AM
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ooo, i like =]
i think the images of the guy could have a border or something, though.they look like they were just randomly placed there
otherwise, i like it =]
 
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post Feb 20 2008, 11:06 AM
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i thin it's pretty good, although the right side feels quite a bit heavier than the left.
 
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post Feb 20 2008, 11:17 AM
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Michael Buble is an amazing singer, And so is this piece of work.
 
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post Feb 20 2008, 12:43 PM
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QUOTE(brooklyneast05 @ Feb 20 2008, 11:06 AM) *
i thin it's pretty good, although the right side feels quite a bit heavier than the left.

maybe i'll change the lyrics around.

QUOTE(SilentLaugh @ Feb 20 2008, 10:57 AM) *
ooo, i like =]
i think the images of the guy could have a border or something, though.they look like they were just randomly placed there
otherwise, i like it =]

what kind of border were you thinking?
 
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post Feb 20 2008, 04:11 PM
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thats pretty good, could have done without the sparks and yeah the ouline would have also looked nice
 
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post Feb 20 2008, 04:33 PM
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i'll try to find something to outline it.
 
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post Feb 20 2008, 04:40 PM
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What is so special about this guy?
 
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post Feb 20 2008, 04:40 PM
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he's good
 
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post Feb 20 2008, 04:41 PM
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Oh gee, that helped.
 
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post Feb 20 2008, 04:43 PM
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good singers are good. that's what's so good about them. goodness
 
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post Feb 20 2008, 07:00 PM
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he has an excellent voice which expresses
his awesome lyrics in a "good" way to
nice contemporary music.

I like the piece, cept I'm not digg'n the
sparks sooo much, but its still nice with
them too.
 
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post Feb 20 2008, 07:05 PM
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I like this, actually. It's way different from what you usually make, which I think is good.
 
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post Feb 20 2008, 09:02 PM
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I can see why you dont like it. Its horrible.

Kidding, of course. I really like it. I absolutely love michael buble. And like jc said, the right feels a bit heavier than the left. But overall its great.
 
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post Feb 20 2008, 09:14 PM
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This is great Ryan - expcept the light texture used on the photos of him... I think it's a little too bright.
 
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post Feb 20 2008, 09:27 PM
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i like it.

the only thing the bothers me is the alignment of some of the pictures and text. i like the whole slightly unaligned concept, but some of it is too close to being aligned, which makes it just look wrong unaligned. not sure if that makes sense.

the way his last name is written kinda bothers me too, since its not aligned with anything. XD!

but that's just all nitpicking.

nicely done.
 
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post Feb 20 2008, 09:46 PM
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thanks for the comments and critiques. I will definitely take in some of the advices.
 
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post Feb 20 2008, 11:59 PM
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I like it! I actually like the light textures. The only thing that bothers me is the purple picture. Other than that, nice work. :D
 
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post Feb 21 2008, 12:59 AM
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I like it, I kind of agree with agiri about the pictures/text. Otherwise it's good
 
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post Feb 21 2008, 01:10 AM
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I really like this, it looks good IMO. Slightly different from your other work. I notice that you like to use those diagonal things on the wallpaper since you use that often.

Good job Ryan.
 
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post Feb 21 2008, 10:32 AM
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^yeah, the stripes are my go-to brush, when I'm stump on what to use.
 
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post Feb 21 2008, 09:24 PM
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i really like everything about it..michael buble is amazing!~great job flowers.gif
 
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post Mar 10 2008, 06:04 PM
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i made some changes. Check it out.

I still don't know what to do with the images.
 
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post Mar 10 2008, 06:09 PM
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I don't know what it was like before, but i feel like the top right corner is weighed down because the background behind the top right image extends over, making it seem like a part of the picture. the problem with that is that the background edge touches the center picture as well, creating a big blob of image. maybe it's just me, but I feel like there needs to be a consistency in terms of border/spaces between pictures?


and I'm not toooo comfortable with the fact that you cut his head off LOL, but that's just my take on it. everything else looks fine!
 
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I like it. The only thing i dislike is the turquoise border to the right. But i think without it, the graphic would look too plain. Nevertheless, nice job. _smile.gif
 

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