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I am a writer, a poet, so yeah...
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post Mar 19 2006, 08:06 PM
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I just need some CC on this

The creamy, white paper sits beneath my world
A catacomb of ideas and muse that begins with anything
I am a poet, a writer
I sing my words on scraps that to anyone else would
seem meaningless and insignificant
A fly that sits upon a wall and is like any other.

My mind slips into its home, its place
the letters I scribble form words, sentences, poetry
They shape what I am thinking, what I am rebelling from
I am a poet, a writer
I gather my writings from some unworldly field
A meadow where the flowers reek of innocence.

I listen to the words on the page
They are speaking to me
They are what I am and what I will become
I am everything that I write about
Experiences from here and there
I am writer, a poet.
 
RiddleMeWonders
post Mar 19 2006, 09:40 PM
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I love it.

I really do.

And there a few reasons why:

a) I can relate to it, so well, that I think I'm going to take this and credit it you with it, claiming it as my favorite poem *for now*.
b) It takes you inside and you can hear someone saying the words, and feeling them.
c) It isn't perfect. It's your own style, it is a little uneven in format, but that's what makes it alive.

Awesome.
 
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post Mar 20 2006, 08:10 PM
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QUOTE(RiddleMeWonders @ Mar 19 2006, 9:40 PM) *
I love it.

I really do.

And there a few reasons why:

a) I can relate to it, so well, that I think I'm going to take this and credit it you with it, claiming it as my favorite poem *for now*.
b) It takes you inside and you can hear someone saying the words, and feeling them.
c) It isn't perfect. It's your own style, it is a little uneven in format, but that's what makes it alive.

Awesome.

You're really loving this poem, huh? I can tell, its well expressed.
 
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post Mar 22 2006, 05:10 PM
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Thanks you guys! happy.gif
 
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post Mar 22 2006, 07:12 PM
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Yeah, it was really nicely written..

I like this part:


Well...I was just about to put one part, and then another, and then another and it was just the whole poem!! Haha, good job!!
 
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post Mar 24 2006, 07:34 PM
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Thanks! wink.gif
 
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post Mar 26 2006, 10:14 PM
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Cute.
I liked it.
 

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