I am a writer, a poet, so yeah... |
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I am a writer, a poet, so yeah... |
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![]() Senior Member ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 621 Joined: Mar 2006 Member No: 387,078 ![]() |
I just need some CC on this
The creamy, white paper sits beneath my world A catacomb of ideas and muse that begins with anything I am a poet, a writer I sing my words on scraps that to anyone else would seem meaningless and insignificant A fly that sits upon a wall and is like any other. My mind slips into its home, its place the letters I scribble form words, sentences, poetry They shape what I am thinking, what I am rebelling from I am a poet, a writer I gather my writings from some unworldly field A meadow where the flowers reek of innocence. I listen to the words on the page They are speaking to me They are what I am and what I will become I am everything that I write about Experiences from here and there I am writer, a poet. |
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I love it.
I really do. And there a few reasons why: a) I can relate to it, so well, that I think I'm going to take this and credit it you with it, claiming it as my favorite poem *for now*. b) It takes you inside and you can hear someone saying the words, and feeling them. c) It isn't perfect. It's your own style, it is a little uneven in format, but that's what makes it alive. Awesome. |
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*ranniel* |
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I love it. I really do. And there a few reasons why: a) I can relate to it, so well, that I think I'm going to take this and credit it you with it, claiming it as my favorite poem *for now*. b) It takes you inside and you can hear someone saying the words, and feeling them. c) It isn't perfect. It's your own style, it is a little uneven in format, but that's what makes it alive. Awesome. You're really loving this poem, huh? I can tell, its well expressed. |
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Thanks you guys!
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Yeah, it was really nicely written..
I like this part: Well...I was just about to put one part, and then another, and then another and it was just the whole poem!! Haha, good job!! |
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![]() Senior Member ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 621 Joined: Mar 2006 Member No: 387,078 ![]() |
Thanks!
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![]() no news is good news... ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 123 Joined: Sep 2005 Member No: 232,063 ![]() |
Cute.
I liked it. |
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