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Vector in Progress, eighty percent
Gypsy Eyes
post Feb 23 2006, 01:33 PM
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Ok so I've been working on this vector for weeks. It's for my graphic design class at school. Something so far looks a little bit off to me, but I can't figure it out. Maybe you guys can.

Obviously it's not done yet, I still have to do the facial features, hair and the outline but tell me what you think so far. I need all the critique possible.



Layers:145
Time: on and off for two weeks
Program: Both Illustrator and photoshop
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post Feb 23 2006, 02:23 PM
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Very nice, the face does need a bit more work tho.
 
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post Feb 23 2006, 04:07 PM
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^she said it's only 80% finished
Great job so far, I can't wait to see it finished. You chose a really cool pic btw _smile.gif
 
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post Feb 23 2006, 04:18 PM
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very nice
we did stuff like that in our graphic design class too
i cant wait to see then end product
its a crazy pic, no joke
 
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post Feb 23 2006, 04:25 PM
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honestly, i dont see anything wrong. wow, over 100 layers. you awesome vectoring people amaze me :)

i wish my school had a graphic design class :( all we have is web design that isnt teaching me anything!
 
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post Feb 23 2006, 04:28 PM
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I like it so far, but the left side, of the dress is kinda choppy. i don't know if it's supose to be like that though.
 
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post Feb 23 2006, 04:28 PM
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I love what you have so far. You must have a great deal of patience! I can't wait to see what you do with her face. =)
 
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post Feb 23 2006, 04:37 PM
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Looks awesome so far. :>
 
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post Feb 23 2006, 05:10 PM
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QUOTE(Kenado @ Feb 23 2006, 4:28 PM) *
I like it so far, but the left side, of the dress is kinda choppy. i don't know if it's supose to be like that though.

Aha! That's what looked off, it makes it look disproportionate (is that even a word?). Thank you very much
 
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post Feb 23 2006, 05:40 PM
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The outfit is great, awesome skin shading.
 
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post Feb 23 2006, 07:24 PM
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Nice.The face is a bit rough though.
 
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post Feb 23 2006, 07:27 PM
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looks good. as always. I'm really looking forward to seeing her face finished.
 
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post Feb 23 2006, 07:35 PM
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QUOTE(Kenado @ Feb 23 2006, 1:28 PM) *
I like it so far, but the left side, of the dress is kinda choppy. i don't know if it's supose to be like that though.

Hey I was going to say that pinch.gif
anyways everything else is awsome happy.gif
 
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post Feb 23 2006, 07:37 PM
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that is awesome, I hope you finish it.. it'll look great!
 
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post Feb 23 2006, 07:59 PM
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That is awsome so far.
The clothing can look more realistic. So i hope you do some shading on that. I know your not done.
Everything else is fine. flowers.gif
 

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