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 Feb 7 2006, 08:16 PM
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I was looking at the seventeen cover and I thoguht-I bet they hire people to design the cover-so I thoguht, "Why not try it?" It doesn't look that great but I think it's cool.
Here it is:  thumbed Comments & constructive critisisim(sp?) please  edit// I just noticed that some how the text's outline got messed up... edit// image shack makes everything fuzzy >=[ |
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Feb 7 2006, 08:19 PM
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 I like it like that Group: Member Posts: 1,248 Joined: Mar 2004 Member No: 5,961 |
lol I just finished reading that . Anyways, i think you did pretty good.
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Feb 7 2006, 08:24 PM
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 the name is ada. Group: Official Member Posts: 4,688 Joined: Dec 2005 Member No: 334,608 |
Ouu that`s smart.I never thought of that.hahaha Good Job!
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Feb 7 2006, 08:29 PM
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That's awsome!
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Feb 7 2006, 08:30 PM
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haha that's cute.
The only thing I was say would be to change the font you used to type "Beautiful" (Scriptina I think?). It's kinda hard to read because it's so thin and curly. Also maybe find a higher quality image, the one you used it kinda blurry. Other than that, I really like it
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Feb 7 2006, 08:40 PM
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 ;) Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 9,573 Joined: Feb 2005 Member No: 99,124 |
It's pretty cool in my opinion. I like all of the fonts that you chose to use.
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Feb 7 2006, 08:40 PM
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Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 3,055 Joined: Jul 2005 Member No: 174,796 |
Wow thatks guys I didn't think I get so many compliments-and pigo thanks, this month's cover had a curly font so I thought it might look good if I used scriptina but now I see it might have looked better if I used something a bit more simple
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Feb 7 2006, 08:43 PM
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 Peggy. Group: Member Posts: 2,508 Joined: Aug 2005 Member No: 214,025 |
I don't really like the curly fonts (scriptina and curlz).
The rest is awesome, nonetheless. |
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Feb 7 2006, 09:18 PM
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 ladybugs are hot <3 Group: Member Posts: 1,169 Joined: Jan 2005 Member No: 93,802 |
in school we had to make a whole magazine like 4 people in a group lols we made a gossip magazine and we made liike so many diferent kinds of covers till we got the perfect onee. it was fun.
 i like ur coverr its awesome
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Feb 7 2006, 09:24 PM
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 Are You Kidding? Group: Member Posts: 1,714 Joined: Sep 2005 Member No: 237,747 |
The text isnt mess up. Well, it is. U just have to click on the picture until u get the original size. Its nice.
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Feb 7 2006, 09:27 PM
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 Pocketful of Sunshine Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 8,690 Joined: Nov 2005 Member No: 289,004 |
The hot pink doesen't really belong, and I don't like that you wrote over her lips. But the other things are ok.
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Feb 7 2006, 09:37 PM
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 that heaven is overrated Group: Member Posts: 5,096 Joined: Oct 2004 Member No: 53,124 |
That's really creative! I just think it could be more organized. The word "beautiful" is too scattered across her face. And a higher quality picture and better fonts would be better. But I like the idea. Good job =]
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Feb 7 2006, 09:38 PM
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 Julia Tested, Mother Approved Group: Member Posts: 61 Joined: Jul 2005 Member No: 188,066 |
OMG. That looks so cool. I want to try, but I think it'll end up crappy compared to yours. :( The only thing I would change is the size, cause it's a bit too big. And the font hurts my eyes, unless you were going for a Valentine incorporated theme.
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Feb 7 2006, 09:47 PM
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thats a really cool idea and i like how the cover wuold attract attention b/c the fonts r so."fun-loving" but i dont really like the placemnt of the text..it goes over her face..so its kinda distrating..and it also looks a bit disorganized like that..but otherwise its a very attention grabbing cover
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Feb 7 2006, 09:49 PM
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 Call me Elsie Mae Group: Member Posts: 936 Joined: Aug 2005 Member No: 207,655 |
QUOTE(peggysturr @ Feb 7 2006, 5:43 PM) I don't really like the curly fonts (scriptina and curlz).  me too but i think the color of "beautiful" should be different.. cuz it blends in with her red lips |
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Feb 7 2006, 11:26 PM
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 Amberific. Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 12,913 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 29,772 |
The font (Scriptina) goes over her face way too much. Now that I look at it again, all of the fonts go over her face too much. The fonts should frame the face, not overtake it. And while the porportion you chose for the picture is great, the quality isn't.
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Feb 7 2006, 11:52 PM
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 I intend to live forever-so far, so good. Group: Member Posts: 2,820 Joined: Mar 2005 Member No: 115,137 |
^LOL thats because her face is the whole picture =P jk
haha anyways =O whoever said pink and red match! [well theres an exception for valentines day] hahah. you can tell you resized the pic.. cuz its bad quality. its pretty different from the many magazine covers ive seen. never really witnessed such curly font haha but thats your theme, so i guess its ok. everything is really random =( like the placement and the many fonts and the beautiful is to big. its like a second title of sumthing. its very creative tho. you can def tell its a magazine cover. its very unique and cute too
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Feb 8 2006, 04:11 AM
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 yan lin♥ Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 14,129 Joined: Apr 2004 Member No: 13,627 |
scriptina is overused, and it doesn't really match the entire picture.
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Feb 8 2006, 03:12 PM
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thats an awesome idea, i never thought of that either.great job,thats pretty amazinG
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Feb 8 2006, 04:13 PM
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 speechless Group: Member Posts: 869 Joined: Jul 2005 Member No: 163,564 |
QUOTE(sharerol @ Feb 7 2006, 6:37 PM) That's really creative! I just think it could be more organized. The word "beautiful" is too scattered across her face. And a higher quality picture and better fonts would be better. But I like the idea. Good job =] Took the words right out of my mouth. Anyways, the text on the cover shouldn't mention Ashlee Simpson that much. What magazine does that? Or maybe I'm wrong. Don't matter. |
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Feb 8 2006, 06:58 PM
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 something more Group: Member Posts: 2,468 Joined: Mar 2004 Member No: 8,808 |
QUOTE(sharerol @ Feb 7 2006, 7:37 PM) That's really creative! I just think it could be more organized. The word "beautiful" is too scattered across her face. And a higher quality picture and better fonts would be better. But I like the idea. Good job =] I agree, the word "Beautiful" is to big and it kinda blockes her face. A better qulity choice for the picture would be nice. Everything else is awsome. |
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Feb 8 2006, 10:31 PM
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you spelled fragrance wrong
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Feb 9 2006, 07:49 PM
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 there's nothing, the end, it's begun Group: Member Posts: 221 Joined: Feb 2006 Member No: 370,838 |
It's very nice, I'd have to say. There are some things that I'd recommend, however. 1. The Seventeen magazines usually do not consist of a neon colored top border like you have in the hot pink. It takes a bit away from the magazine color as it doesn't exactly match. 2. The Seventeen font has a slight border around it, as well as the other red fonts. I'd suggest that the border be replaced with a slight shadow, it may make the fonts look smoother. You could even try for an outer glow if you work with Adobe PS. 3. Seventeen magazines a lot of times have the main features of the face showing. The script over the mouth is a bit distracting. 4. The word fragnences should be spelled fragrances, if that's what you wanted implied. Overall, great job! Keep it up! |
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Feb 9 2006, 08:47 PM
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 omygay Group: Member Posts: 186 Joined: Oct 2005 Member No: 281,195 |
Its.. okay. It could be better. I just think that it could be a little bit more organized. I dont like Scripta font or whatever its called.
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Feb 9 2006, 08:56 PM
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 show me a garden thats bursting to life Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 12,303 Joined: Mar 2005 Member No: 115,987 |
3 fonts max, please.
The scriptina, yeah, not great... If anything really bugs me, it's the 5 bagillion fonts. The picture isn't that fuzzy 
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