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 Jun 10 2005, 09:31 PM
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Jun 10 2005, 09:43 PM
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good job *sniff* :[
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Jun 10 2005, 10:14 PM
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aww thats sad..
good poem though :) |
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Jun 10 2005, 10:16 PM
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Omg that is really good, in a way it reminds me of Star wars 3, when Pamde' dies.
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Jun 10 2005, 10:21 PM
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 My name's Katt. Nice to meet you! Group: Member Posts: 3,826 Joined: Jan 2005 Member No: 93,674 |
QUOTE(iNyCxShoRT @ Jun 10 2005, 9:16 PM) Omg that is really good, in a way it reminds me of Star wars 3, when Pamde' dies.  Eek. Thanks for telling. I haven't seen the movie. Actually, my friend told me that anyway. That's really good, but you probably could do better with word choice. And if you think about it, this girl's really overreacting. Otherwise, you did a good job and the rhyming is really good and flows well. I like the ending. 
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Jun 10 2005, 10:47 PM
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QUOTE(AkaRyux @ Jun 10 2005, 10:21 PM) Eek. Thanks for telling. I haven't seen the movie. Actually, my friend told me that anyway. That's really good, but you probably could do better with word choice. And if you think about it, this girl's really overreacting. Otherwise, you did a good job and the rhyming is really good and flows well. I like the ending. haha, thanks . and no , i'm not overreacting . if you're dating a guy like mine, you'll need to kno if he's safe all the time , cuz he could get hurt anytime . fricking G T-T |
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Jun 11 2005, 02:51 PM
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awww it's so touching. but sad at the same time. hug? *hugs*
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Jun 11 2005, 10:33 PM
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 I'll never be who I was again.. Group: Member Posts: 2,886 Joined: Jan 2005 Member No: 77,981 |
wow...so sad...
 i like it though..good job.. 
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