^no.

shaking my head at these online detectives

Shaking my head at these blind posers.

My, my, I thought we would never see you again//
After Roxy tagged shameful, bloody "R" on your skin//
But who knows? Maybe it was just a brand on your ass//
Maybe you needed to come and lose some more of your class//
But man, I'm proud, even I wouldn't show up in this place//
After I just had my hopes and dreams transformed to disgrace//
You're like a little cockroach, comin' back every week//
Runnin' in and out of cB, playin' hide-and-go-seek//
All you need is one good crush, one good stomp on the head//
That's all it takes to make your mama's tears begin to be shed//
Or would she cry? Would she even give a second cognition?//
Would anybody give a f**k? Anyone show recognition?//
I say no, I don't think anyone would be broken hearted//
We'd all rejoice, rejoice, your wack ass raps have finally parted!//
Say it again, loud and proud -- rejoice, rejoice!//
THANK GOD, this bitch is gone, and he's lost his voice!//

lols. nice rap. it rhymes and actually has a point in it, not like the other raps saying " i like to _____ hoes and bitches." < which are pointless.

Yo i'm gonna end this BATTLE, no time to WASTE//
Take these lines, and give it a TASTE//
Im not going to run and hide, Im going to stand tall and stand FIRM//
Why the f*ck is this man using these psychology TERMS//
Well I will let everyone witness the bystander EFFECT~WITH~ME//
If you were a phone you couldn’t CONNECT~WITH~ME///
If I saw your girl I would turn her around and then SLAP~HER on her ass//
Look everyone I’ve turned CRV into an inspiring RAPPER that fast//
I have to admit CRV your last rap was a little clever//
But you getting rid of me is like exterminating roaches forever//
It isn’t going to happen no time in the future nor the present//
I hate to brag but im so damn effervescent//
My flow is so damn Vivacious and ENTHUSIASTIC that you know its CLASSIC //
Im not even going to comment on WINTERKNIGHTES rap, because it wasn’t that drastic//
Why does everyone wish to DEVASTATE~ME//
Like I said they love me but pretend to HATE~ME//
So why can’t these rappers diss anyone else on this forum thing//
Its because they thought they were the ace but their lower than a king//
In other words they softer than the sh*t I wipe my ass with//
And everything they say is nothing but Bull Sh*t//

thanks

naw jason dude wasnt feeling it you've written better ones but this one was just not too great, it seems like your focusing on a main idea which isnt bad but the same thing over and over again man?? naw your creative, use it.