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that sounds like that wack ass rhyme from marci-x.

funny tho.

That was pretty good for a first rap. Who knows maybe you will improve over time like Jason. His last couple of raps have been fantastic. This rap made me LOL, then LMAO, and then ROTFL.


Makes me wonder what Jason's going to come with.

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lol no im laughing with you.

I have no clue who marci x is.

Oh angie you've got to be kidding me//
She has gotten her diss on//
Now shes a R. Kelly victim about to get pissed on//
You can go ahead and put away your tension//
Just another Girl demanding attention//
Well Im going to have to teach you how to stunt//
Murder you lyrically and give you the publicity you want//
That was quite OUTRAGEOUS and COURAGEOUS of you//
Especially when I start lyrically KILLING you ,since no ones FEELING you//
Calling me a fake, man Im the real deal//
Leave you locked away like a Japanese seal//
Them boys don’t have to holla they can hit it ANYTIME//
I SHINE ,while you take backstrokes from BEHIND//
It doesn’t take to much for me to crack bones//
Have you repeating yourself more than Mike Jones//
Its funny since you quoted “this rap is not like me”//
You need to be kicked in the ass with a Nike//
Not a wannabe im a gonna be star//
You’ve lost control like a drunk at a bar//
So I Laugh MY Ass Off because that was too funny//
Go back to stripping, you’ll make more money//

nice rap lidoxangie im laughing with you not at you alight? it was awsome....

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An Infatuation with NIKE is so not LIKE ME//
Words come to blows and then you want to FIGHT ME//
Watch as Jason shows you how to DO THIS//
Show you that your rap is not the TRUEST//
I can be 50 and Em and make you Patiently wait for your lyrical death//
I do you like Destiny’s Child and make you lose your breath//
Watch the kid come through and rip//
Bring more juice than Jerry Curl drip//
No man nor Woman can dare f*ck with flowing//
Have you like the Energizer bunny, you keep going & going//
This rap right here is just a mere sample//
To bad I have to make you out of an example//
Whats with phunk are you from the Black eyed Peas//
Besides that, your flow is more sickening than a contagious disease//
Your rap is in need of improvement//
I start revolutions like the black panther movements//
So if you got skills you gone have to SHOW ME//
Because Im T.I. and you dont KNOW ME//
I'm trying to stay STRONG and stay SICK//
Don't get me wrong on DISS , so just lay off my d**k//

the real roxanne

vs

roxanne chauntay

!!

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dang but at least i didnt' rip rhymes from Cassidy . Dat right there was nice.

Gooooo angie...haha Jason..you suck.

Oh my, dear//
I make you look inferior//
U should bow down to your superior//
This time I will finish you fast//
Your image is more softer than a baby’s ass//
Put you in a CAST and make you half PAST dead//
Whoever told you that you were the best is outta of their head//
I keep it MOVING while you’ve been PROVING wrong//
You come up short because my d*ck is too long//
Your not down to ride with my lyrical homicide//
Slip and I slide and wipe you out completely like a genocide//
I got more heat than Dwyane Wade//
I do you like a Piano, you always get played//
Keep my piece but not peace when the drama start//
I will play you like the strings on a harp//
Matter of fact please play your part//
Because I do you like GAME and make you have a change of hart//
So like T.I. and Nelly girl lets get loose//
And after this battle we can call it a truce//

this seems interesting *waits for outcome* nice rap at the beginning, angie (im not going to comment on the rest bc theres too many)

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rhyming couplets.

I keep it MOVING while you’ve been PROVING wrong//
You come up short because my d*ck is too long//


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LOL...no.

yeah he's korean.... what does that mean.

Haha yo angie
Im RUTHLESS and your flow is USELESS sh*t//
The TRUTH IS you can USE THIS advice to your benifit//
FLIPPING and RIPPING you while you fall and trip//
I can make you bleed like a blood, and crippled like a crip//
You trying to MOVE ME an PROVE ME wrong//
To bad I have to EMBARRASS and HARASS you on the same song//
Im LOVING everything I do while Im OVEN cooking you//
Stomp you like a insect at the bottom of my shoe//
Look people no copy and PASTE//
Give this girl a bad TASTE and put her to WASTE//
I practically own every season//
Call me the cops because I beat you for no reason//
You cant MOVE ME im like a MOVIE film//
Your girlfriends like “WHOSE HE, I think I like him”//

That was cold blooded. I love that line.


OMG!!!! Thats the coldest line ive heard thus far in this thread.

How the heck did you improve this fast anyway?

RAP WARS!!!

*cough*
....jason-your getting good ^^

hahah gotta give it to jason hes improving XD basic DISS

is that all you got jason? dissin a girl
ima beat you lyrically and emotinally
make sure this isnt a forgotten memory
look at this guy thinking hes the sh*t
your as wack like 50 cent and g unit
still got no rhythm, still no flow
i aint trynna hate but you gotta go
the rap game is wack as it is
its you to blame for laying out a weak a$$ diss
the only thing you beat , was hittin your sh*t at night
no wonder your di*k is so small, you've been holdin it to tight
im to raw for you , might as well quit
just like how "The Game" left g-unit
i aint playing with you son this battle is mine
if you wanna battle again get your a$$ back in line
cuz once i start spittin these battles never stop
thats why you end up at the bottom while im on the top

Rap War indeed. I'm imagining all of you in this huge hip hop video clip. ^_^ And all your raps are pretty good.

INTERFERENCE for my CLEARANCE is not allowed//
If you don’t get to MOVING while Im GROVING than your going to get plowed//
Your flow is fundamental and basic//
That why Im going to call you GTA because your about to get wasted//
Your nothing but CHICKEN~FEED, smoke ya like a pound of WEED, So you want be able to grow your SEED//
My flow is MAJOR~LEAGUE ,you can watch the PLAYER~LEAD, and MC SLAY~YOUR BREED//
This will make you MOVE~IT, Drive you like BUIK, while your saying DO~IT to me//
Get in FRONT~OF~ME, and try to STUNT~ON~ME, I will kill you before you can put a HUNT~ON~ME//
Your not my HOMIE ,so what the f*ck you want FROM~ME, you must want me to f*ck with your CHI and ENERGY//
Got this rap LOCKED like a GLOCK with the gun COCKED//
My rap is like a mixture of ROCK and HIP HOP//
Put you on HOLD, lets all ROCK~AND~ROLL while this Girlie gets TOLD//
Your selling your SOUL, Im taking CONTROL and leave you out to dry because your ICE~COLD//
Im to MUCH, Im like Omarion’s TOUCH, all the ladies want to grip my CLUTCH//
I come through it the CLUTCH, got the Balls and the NUTS, making entrances that rivals Starskey and HUTCH//