Dead Inside, short and sweet.... |
 Mar 10 2005, 05:01 PM
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 Live Your Own Party  Group: Member Posts: 1,261 Joined: Mar 2004 Member No: 7,489  |
I don't know why I wrote this "mini-poem" either. I was just bored and I wanted to put something creative and origional in my AIM profile, so I came up with this. (Again, it has absolutly no relevance to how i was/am feeling.)
she spoke her mind until they trampled her words she opened her heart until they tore it apart she had a smile on her face until they put tears in her eyes she lead a good life until she died inside...... Just tell me how you like it and why, if you can. I think it's just how I feel about what goes on with other people. Not necissarily me. But.. yeah... Just.. leave some love. Or hate if you wish. 
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Mar 10 2005, 07:07 PM
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 i am a liar Group: Member Posts: 69 Joined: Dec 2004 Member No: 77,216 |
QUOTE(rOckThISshYt @ Mar 10 2005, 5:01 PM) she spoke her mind until they trampled her words  heart heart heart |
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Mar 10 2005, 07:48 PM
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 rwar (; Group: Member Posts: 590 Joined: Feb 2005 Member No: 103,308 |
thats an awesome poem !
great job (; |
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Mar 11 2005, 06:48 PM
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 Senior Member Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 7,025 Joined: Feb 2004 Member No: 4,051 |
wow i really like that. great job!
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Mar 12 2005, 06:20 PM
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Live Your Own Party Group: Member Posts: 1,261 Joined: Mar 2004 Member No: 7,489 |
QUOTE(xtransatlanticismx @ Mar 10 2005, 8:07 PM) heart heart heart Question:: what do you mean?  PS: thanks everyone 
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