My Full Rap, Gangsta Delight |
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 Aug 2 2005, 10:15 PM
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 Lil JC  Group: Member Posts: 868 Joined: May 2005 Member No: 145,741  |
Here's The First Song I've Ever Written
It's Chorus- 10 Bars + Verse 1- 28 Bars + Chorus- 10 Bars + Verse 2- 27 Bars + Chorus- 10 Bars + Verse 3- 26 Bars = 111 Bars QUOTE (CHORUS 2x)
what should i do// who should i see// where should i go// i dont know// but i gotta blow// and become a gangsta delight// (Verse 1) i know you dont me// and dont wanna be my homie// but i'll only warn ya once// dont disrespect me cuz// i'll knock off yo mamma, daddy, sister, brother, and ya cuz// i got more connections than tha world wide web// yeah thats jus the flow and ebb// kang goes bang ya know what i mean// f**k that like a marine on jeanine// im almost fifteen// danger danger// he's gettin his permit// one more year and i'll be legit// joey d screamin you can do it// bitch you could neva take a hit// ill eat a bullet// four hours later i flush it// got alot of warrants out for me// i aint the illest emcee// im jus lil JC// the one and and only austin henry// but jus cause i'm from da hood// does that mean i gotta be so misunderstood// they act like its impossible for me to do any good// maybe they're right// but i dont do shit out of spite// you only see me as corrupt cuz you so uptight// but to my boys i'm out of sight// (Chorus 2x) what should i do// who should i see// where should i go// i dont know// but i gotta blow// and become a gangsta delight// (Verse 2) you cant rap about dope slangin// til you've moved some product// you cant rap about gang bangin// til you've seen ya friend die in the street// my voice is sweet// and i kill this beat// should i make kangsta a rhymin cheat sheet// when i travel they put me in tha presidential suite// yeah im rollin with the elite// not halo// im talkin bout yayo// GGGG-UNIT 50, buck, banks// but to the game thanks// you brought back the west coast// 300 bars and what// f**k runnin you could just coast// im harder than most// you can call me burnt toast// i dont know why// it wouldnt make you fly// i can get ya high// and stick my blade in ya eye// everybody gotta die// but it aint my time// i aint anywhere near my prime// at least let me finish this rhyme// (Chorus 2x) what should i do// who should i see// where should i go// i dont know// but i gotta blow// and become a gangsta delight// (Verse 3) comin up always confused my uncle kissin a dude// but if i mention it i just cause a feud// there's only a few// that could take my place// but if they try i'll bust nine up in they face// you dont wanna retaliate// i got my top flight soldiers and my .38// you cant break my stride i will be great// we got kangsta here rappin like he only eight// you cant even get a date// you barely straight// you cant rap you can only hate// i cant be stopped// i wont be stopped// til i reach tha top// dis aint no kids bop// dis is hip-hop// so jason just stop// before you face flop// i could go to the bahamas and island hop// but you stuck here waitin at tha bus stop// im rollin on chrome 22's in tha drop-top// but all yo shit stuck in a chop shop// i could go on until my heart stop// but this rhyme is ova// like da career of hova// |
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Aug 2 2005, 10:36 PM
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 ;) Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 9,573 Joined: Feb 2005 Member No: 99,124 |
Pretty dope lyrics....
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Aug 3 2005, 02:10 AM
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Lil JC Group: Member Posts: 868 Joined: May 2005 Member No: 145,741 |
i hate that this has to be in writing cuz nobody replies in writing they just read it and go on
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Aug 3 2005, 01:38 PM
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Member Group: Member Posts: 11 Joined: Apr 2005 Member No: 128,064 |
dang dats fresh
aha one |
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Aug 3 2005, 02:35 PM
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Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 88 Joined: Jul 2005 Member No: 182,272 |
i thought the words were pretty good, but it's a subject that seems tro have been done by every rapper.
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Aug 3 2005, 02:38 PM
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Lil JC Group: Member Posts: 868 Joined: May 2005 Member No: 145,741 |
aight wat kind of topic should i write about i need some ideas
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Aug 3 2005, 08:26 PM
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 Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 32 Joined: Jul 2005 Member No: 185,468 |
Nice Rhymes.
Ideas: Write about whatever you want to write about even if its about you going outside for morning jog. Music should have no bounds and the artist should be able to express his artistic freedom however he pleases. There are so many approaches you can take when writing a song. For instance you can do like "Eminem - Stan" or "Common - Testify" and tell an intriguing story. You can also step outside of the boundries of just reality and use your imagination. Maybe it can be something from a dream or a fantasy. Be eccentric and standout from other poets in order to show you deserve recognition. LOL that was kind of a stupid paragraph on my part. |
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Aug 3 2005, 08:57 PM
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 My name's Katt. Nice to meet you! Group: Member Posts: 3,826 Joined: Jan 2005 Member No: 93,674 |
im harder than most//
you can call me burnt toast// i dont know why// This is horrible, burnt toast. ill eat a bullet// four hours later i flush it// What the hell is that supposed to mean? and stick my blade in ya eye// everybody gotta die// ... we got kangsta here rappin like he only eight// you cant even get a date// you barely straight// Okay, I'll admit that line is good.  but i dont do shit out of spite// you only see me as corrupt cuz you so uptight// Why are you talking about making feces? Okay, overall, this whole rap reminded me of an Andy Milonakis rap. It had no point or anything. It sure beats Jason though. 
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Aug 4 2005, 03:38 AM
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 Bay Area YadadaDiiiig. Group: Official Member Posts: 4,249 Joined: Feb 2005 Member No: 103,202 |
interesting lyrics.
your chorus confused me. just a little. doesnt seem to go along with the rest i think. |
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Aug 5 2005, 02:25 AM
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Lil JC Group: Member Posts: 868 Joined: May 2005 Member No: 145,741 |
im not too good on choruses im thinkin of makin somethin without a chorus
QUOTE but i dont do shit out of spite// you only see me as corrupt cuz you so uptight// Why are you talking about making feces? umm...im not |
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Aug 6 2005, 01:23 AM
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QUOTE(lbjshaq2345 @ Aug 5 2005, 2:25 AM) im not too good on choruses im thinkin of makin somethin without a chorus umm...im not  God, you suck. lol jk..but u dont gotta diss me hard like that man.. |
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Aug 6 2005, 07:06 AM
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My name's Katt. Nice to meet you! Group: Member Posts: 3,826 Joined: Jan 2005 Member No: 93,674 |
QUOTE(lbjshaq2345 @ Aug 5 2005, 1:25 AM) im not too good on choruses im thinkin of makin somethin without a chorus umm...im not I don't do shit out of spite. Sorry, I think I misread that as 'I don't shit out of spite' Ack, sorry about that. 
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Aug 6 2005, 03:32 PM
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Lil JC Group: Member Posts: 868 Joined: May 2005 Member No: 145,741 |
lol no problem
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Aug 30 2005, 11:06 PM
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Lil JC Group: Member Posts: 868 Joined: May 2005 Member No: 145,741 |
los bumpos ? (failing espanol)
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