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 Jun 22 2005, 12:46 PM
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 show me a garden thats bursting to life  Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 12,303 Joined: Mar 2005 Member No: 115,987  |
Torn edges around the details
Failure written upon her face. Tears indicate everything that fails What happened to her grace? There has always been a hint of sad. Always being known as the disgrace. For everything she was ever known for, it was nothing but a had. give her a penny, she'll give you a dime. Now tell me why would you would let her go? Short and sweet. i wrote it when i was like really depressed. but yea. I think it's still ok? comments opinions please. |
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Jun 22 2005, 08:42 PM
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Wow, I like it! Very good! I could kinda feel what she was feeling. Keep up the good work!
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