Ill Miss You, ANOTHER LOVE POEM |
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 May 14 2005, 06:20 PM
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*Influential Guitarist & Inspiring Writer*  Group: Official Member Posts: 1,217 Joined: Sep 2004 Member No: 51,134  |
i walked away from you and left u to cry
i cant forgive myself for saying goodbye im thinkin to myself how i did you wrong ive been so lonely now that your gone missing you so much i cant sleep at night keep going back to that day when i held u tight i knew from that moment it had to be true your the girl i love, baby ill always love you ill always remember your smile and your sweetest kiss the girl who made me laugh, your the one i'll miss if i could id rather be by your side ill kiss away all the tears you've already cried i know i cant be with you cuz things wont be the same the only thing that keeps me alive, is living through your pain |
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May 14 2005, 09:23 PM
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Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 512 Joined: Mar 2004 Member No: 9,682 |
awwww thats so cute & sad . you're really good at writing poems and stuffs haha
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May 15 2005, 03:24 PM
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 ticktock. Group: Member Posts: 1,138 Joined: Mar 2005 Member No: 118,235 |
wow, it has nice flow&rhyming. but i dont get the last line o_o
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May 15 2005, 04:12 PM
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 Shutup before I smack you. Group: Member Posts: 119 Joined: May 2005 Member No: 136,015 |
wow. if thats a true story, what made that person break up with her in the first place?
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May 15 2005, 08:41 PM
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*Influential Guitarist & Inspiring Writer* Group: Official Member Posts: 1,217 Joined: Sep 2004 Member No: 51,134 |
heh well that person is me lol
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May 15 2005, 10:37 PM
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 I'll never be who I was again.. Group: Member Posts: 2,886 Joined: Jan 2005 Member No: 77,981 |
thats so sad...
 good job though... 
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| *stephinika* |
May 16 2005, 06:58 PM
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very sad, but very well written. great emotions. nice work.
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May 17 2005, 01:49 AM
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 boo Group: Member Posts: 5,512 Joined: Dec 2004 Member No: 71,765 |
 It has a wonderful flow. =) |
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May 25 2005, 07:12 PM
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 dizzy me up. Group: Member Posts: 3,191 Joined: Apr 2004 Member No: 11,139 |
really good but sad =[
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May 27 2005, 09:04 PM
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 ˇvá-monos! Group: Member Posts: 58 Joined: May 2005 Member No: 138,712 |
its a beautiful poem..and im guessing..that you had some differences and either you or her broke it off because of a small fight.. i dont know..i can imagine that happening to me though..its a great poem..
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May 27 2005, 10:11 PM
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*Influential Guitarist & Inspiring Writer* Group: Official Member Posts: 1,217 Joined: Sep 2004 Member No: 51,134 |
hah thnx good to see your sticking around in the forums =] how is your computer runniong?
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May 27 2005, 11:29 PM
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ˇvá-monos! Group: Member Posts: 58 Joined: May 2005 Member No: 138,712 |
haha.. my computer is great! thanks..
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May 28 2005, 05:05 PM
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 .::.Enchanted.::. Group: Member Posts: 69 Joined: May 2005 Member No: 139,202 |
Omg... That's a really good poem and it's very touching... Terrific job!!!
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May 28 2005, 06:37 PM
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 ...and this is me.. Group: Member Posts: 3,518 Joined: Oct 2004 Member No: 57,899 |
It's a sad but sweet poem, nice job.
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Jun 1 2005, 05:58 PM
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 What a hypocrite. Group: Member Posts: 2,754 Joined: Apr 2005 Member No: 128,150 |
It's a very sad poem, but wonderfully written.
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Jun 4 2005, 02:02 AM
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awww sad poem =(. but beautifully written.
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| *T0rmented_Soul* |
Aug 4 2006, 01:50 AM
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More old Poems . I forgot I use ro write these things..I was a better writer back then when I had a reason to write, now I can't find any motivation...
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| *nightmare4taki* |
Aug 8 2006, 01:04 PM
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Haha I see you have So Sick in your sig, I was going to say this is what that reminds me of. I think you have proffessional songwriting potential. Keep it up.
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| *T0rmented_Soul* |
Aug 8 2006, 01:13 PM
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Thanks KC, I use to think that too, but I don't think I'm motivated enough anymore.
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