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 Mar 8 2005, 01:16 PM
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memories
of fantasy of fairy trees of cannon balls in the wind in my pirate ship's sails drifting in the wind in the space between the words in the thoughts of the lovers and the dreamers and the hopers and the screamers and the angels and the children of the wind helen i love thee |
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Mar 8 2005, 02:22 PM
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james - i love your style of writing. seriously. its awesome.
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Mar 8 2005, 06:09 PM
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is that that one that you liked but was too quitar?
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Mar 8 2005, 06:10 PM
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Aww that's really good!
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Mar 8 2005, 06:11 PM
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Very pretty, I love the style. Fairy trees...I like that.
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Mar 8 2005, 06:14 PM
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Another ditch in the road... you keep moving Group: Member Posts: 6,281 Joined: Jan 2005 Member No: 85,152 |
QUOTE is that that one that you liked but was too quitar? i dont know what quitar means. but no, i made this up as i was typing it in to the computer, same with the one about clouds i just put up thanks, steph, i love your 'amidst' i think its tremendous, really |
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Mar 8 2005, 06:42 PM
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QUOTE(MarchHare2UrAlice @ Mar 8 2005, 6:14 PM) i dont know what quitar means. but no, i made this up as i was typing it in to the computer, same with the one about clouds i just put up thanks, steph, i love your 'amidst' i think its tremendous, really  no no no. thats not what i meant. but weve already espablished that, so nevermind |
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