the no named poem, a poem I wrote Options

[runforfun529]

This is the first poem I've ever written on my own, so it probably stinks up this place, but I'll get better. I just need some feedback and I need a name for it lol well here it is.

What is wrong with me?
After all we’ve been through,
Why do I find myself,
Coming back to you?

You tell me you don’t like me.
You tell me that I shouldn’t like you.
But I can’t help it,
I know my feelings are true.

I remember the days,
When we were glad
To be with each other
And never be sad.

But now that I look back
I am beginning to see
That maybe it wasn’t you
That wanted to be with me.

Don’t tell me you still care
That’s not what I want to hear.
You never cared
You’ve made that clear.

All I want
Is to be your friend
But you clearly told me
That it was the end.

The end of all contact
The end of all ties
I guess those promises
Were all just lies.

Love stinks.
But what can I do.
You hate me.
I love you.

I’ll do what I must
And just forget
But that is not possible
At least not yet.

What can I say
you’ve made me feel worthless
But time to give up
And relieve all the stress

[potmonkeyjd]

I liked, as your first def. good. :)