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Want you back
Ekay
post Feb 5 2005, 10:36 PM
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Eternal Syn
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Didn't think I'd come back here...Well anyways...enjoy.

Can you see this façade..?
This fake smile of mine…
That I put on everyday
Just to assure you that nothing’s goin wrong

Whenever I see you
All I do is smile and say hi
While inside my hearts poundin…
At the mere thought of you…

Every time I close my eyes
I suddenly picture you
Standing in the hallways
More radiant than anyone else

You see…what I’m trying to say is…
That I…miss you and I…
Can’t get over you…
 
heyyfrankie
post Feb 6 2005, 03:04 PM
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This bitch better work!
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i think my favorite stanza is the second one. i don't know why! sweating.gif
 
sweetdreamsx3
post Feb 6 2005, 04:08 PM
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It's pretty good. I can relate to that one as well.
 

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