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 Feb 1 2005, 05:36 PM
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*Influential Guitarist & Inspiring Writer*  Group: Official Member Posts: 1,217 Joined: Sep 2004 Member No: 51,134  |
opening my eyes , watching the world pass me by
im walking the path of a lonesome road leaving all my memories and my past behind starting over of a new life ive never had taken a journey to cure this heart of stone to be filled with the love and gentleness of ones touch to be purified for someone i can love so much but for now i walk this path all alone learning the patience it takes to reach a goal the happiness i can recieve without giving a fake smile it may take long it can take awhile this will be the first time of reliefment on my soul but for now i walk a path all alone no one here but just me on my own |
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| *mishyerr* |
Feb 1 2005, 05:50 PM
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It's pretty good. Similiar to Shakespeare sonnet style.. Did you write it after you read my sonnets? ;D
I like the emotions in it.. kindof reminds me of Green Day's "Boulevard of Broken Dreams" |
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| *stephinika* |
Feb 1 2005, 08:20 PM
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nice...i really like the last two lines.
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