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 Jan 23 2005, 10:33 PM
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*Influential Guitarist & Inspiring Writer*  Group: Official Member Posts: 1,217 Joined: Sep 2004 Member No: 51,134  |
sitin here all alone while the sadness comes all over me
its been like this all the good times are nothin but a memory i never thought ill need u cause i never felt like dis before the first day i felt this is the day when walked out that door i regret all those times where i made u cry i regret all those times that i made u wanna die i regret all those times where i wasnt stayin true but ill never regret sharin my love with u i regret those nights where u stayed alone at home i regret those times where i made u look dumb on the phone if ever u wanna get back wit me i promise with all my heart ill always love u honestly - credit goes to my brother matt an inspirin writer looking for an answer =] |
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Jan 24 2005, 06:13 PM
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 Yawn Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 9,530 Joined: Nov 2004 Member No: 65,772 |
aw very romantic
 Nice poem! I especially liked this part:QUOTE i regret all those times where i made u cry i regret all those times that i made u wanna die i regret all those times where i wasnt stayin true but ill never regret sharin my love with u great job! keep it up 
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Jan 24 2005, 08:27 PM
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 Senior Member Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 7,025 Joined: Feb 2004 Member No: 4,051 |
wow nice job. I think it would flow better if you just canned the first part, and just stuck with the i regret lines. nice job!
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Jan 24 2005, 08:36 PM
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 hannah the one and only~ Group: Member Posts: 175 Joined: Feb 2004 Member No: 3,080 |
wow its so amazing i am speechless
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Jan 24 2005, 09:47 PM
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sounds pretty good. nice idea/meaning.
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Jan 24 2005, 10:16 PM
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 WANTED..for sexyness Group: Member Posts: 1,050 Joined: Dec 2004 Member No: 77,290 |
nice poem. very romantic
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