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 Jan 23 2005, 05:05 PM
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*Influential Guitarist & Inspiring Writer*  Group: Official Member Posts: 1,217 Joined: Sep 2004 Member No: 51,134  |
time cant heal these feelings i had for you
with you outta my life i cant make it through im bitter and weak without your touch no one can understand why i love you so much love is like a river that flows through the heart it never stops flowing, it never falls apart love is a special feeling made for two out of so many people i only chose you im down on my knees wanting you back to heal this heart of stone and get back on track ill promise everything and never leave your side your the only one that has a place inside heheh lovely..mood kinda writing |
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Jan 23 2005, 06:02 PM
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 High Voltage!∞ Group: Official Member Posts: 4,728 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 29,157 |
 I absolutely love this poem! it's very deep and loving  ..it's...just..wow
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Jan 23 2005, 06:09 PM
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very nice. i like how it flows. good job.
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Jan 23 2005, 08:00 PM
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 just chillin Group: Member Posts: 429 Joined: Jan 2005 Member No: 88,562 |
QUOTE(stephinika @ Jan 23 2005, 6:09 PM) very nice. i like how it flows. good job.  i agree- you are an amazing poet....... |
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