First Girl, it's very...corny... |
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 Jan 7 2005, 08:33 PM
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Eternal Syn  Group: Member Posts: 398 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 24,000  |
You said to me one day…
That you were giving your heart away To someone special and very dear to your heart You said that it was someone who had flow and was smart Never did I know that, that person would be me As I said yes, you giggled with glee And as the weeks gradually passed, we had our first kiss It seemed to me like such bliss… I couldn’t stop thinking about it…or about you… So as the weeks turned into months, we had our first emotional break through I knew for sure now that we had handed each other our hearts And each of us couldn’t bear to be apart… The one thing that I ask out of this is, that your love will never change Just…Promise me that you’ll never start to act strange… |
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Jan 7 2005, 08:38 PM
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 GATHER ROUND THE GOOD STUFF Group: Member Posts: 216 Joined: Dec 2004 Member No: 73,104 |
I THINK IT'S GOOD
 FOR A FIRST TRY  //edit// I was just kidding i really like it. |
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Jan 7 2005, 08:44 PM
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Eternal Syn Group: Member Posts: 398 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 24,000 |
Well...FYI...this is like my 11th poem...it's just that I think it's really corny... oh and thanks for the reply.
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