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where does my heart belong
Ekay
post Dec 8 2004, 06:44 PM
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Boy haven't submitted anything here in a while..Well here goes..Tell me what you think _smile.gif

I know where my heart belongs
And it belongs with you
I have a sense of right and wrong
This feeling I have for you
I know has been right all along
Yet, I’ve never noticed up till now that
Your smile, beauty, grace and attitude
Is not everything that I should look at
Since beauty is only skin deep, I only look within
Past your façade, make-up, sin and all of that
When I’m with you I’m lost for words, so where can I begin
I normally try to make you laugh, so you don’t catch onto my veneer
Even though I know I shouldn’t be deceiving you
If you should ever find out, I’d want to disappear
If anyone were to tell you, I’d like you to know that my feelings for you are eternally true


~Nguyen
 
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post Dec 8 2004, 08:31 PM
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that's awesome! i can kinda relate to it too. awesome job!
 
Ekay
post Dec 8 2004, 10:22 PM
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Why thank you happy.gif
 
angel-roh
post Dec 15 2004, 02:35 PM
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aww that's very cute!! very touching words you typed down! hehe it's so me and my love life right now haha
 
jennyjenny
post Dec 16 2004, 03:24 PM
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You write good poems.

But this one is heart-touching..
 
Ekay
post Dec 16 2004, 05:54 PM
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Thanks!! I really appreciate the feedback! _smile.gif
 
Sa-Chan
post Dec 16 2004, 06:05 PM
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That's really sweet. It kind of makes me sad. Reminds of something my boyfriend once wrote. You're really good. Love the word veneer.
 
Ekay
post Dec 16 2004, 07:12 PM
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QUOTE(Sa-Chan @ Dec 16 2004, 6:05 PM)
It kind of makes me sad.

It makes you sad?? ohmy.gif Well Just cheer up okay?? Because I don't like seeing sad girls.
 

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