where does my heart belong |
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where does my heart belong |
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Eternal Syn ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 398 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 24,000 ![]() |
Boy haven't submitted anything here in a while..Well here goes..Tell me what you think
![]() I know where my heart belongs And it belongs with you I have a sense of right and wrong This feeling I have for you I know has been right all along Yet, I’ve never noticed up till now that Your smile, beauty, grace and attitude Is not everything that I should look at Since beauty is only skin deep, I only look within Past your façade, make-up, sin and all of that When I’m with you I’m lost for words, so where can I begin I normally try to make you laugh, so you don’t catch onto my veneer Even though I know I shouldn’t be deceiving you If you should ever find out, I’d want to disappear If anyone were to tell you, I’d like you to know that my feelings for you are eternally true ~Nguyen |
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![]() my <3 is in Ohio ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 899 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 27,599 ![]() |
that's awesome! i can kinda relate to it too. awesome job!
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Eternal Syn ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 398 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 24,000 ![]() |
Why thank you
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![]() i'm susan ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Official Member Posts: 13,875 Joined: Feb 2004 Member No: 5,029 ![]() |
aww that's very cute!! very touching words you typed down! hehe it's so me and my love life right now haha
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![]() Senior Member ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 4,357 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 28,115 ![]() |
You write good poems.
But this one is heart-touching.. |
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Eternal Syn ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 398 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 24,000 ![]() |
Thanks!! I really appreciate the feedback!
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![]() Crying Behind Blind Eyes ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 257 Joined: Mar 2004 Member No: 7,967 ![]() |
That's really sweet. It kind of makes me sad. Reminds of something my boyfriend once wrote. You're really good. Love the word veneer.
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Eternal Syn ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 398 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 24,000 ![]() |
QUOTE(Sa-Chan @ Dec 16 2004, 6:05 PM) It kind of makes me sad. It makes you sad?? ![]() |
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