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two depression poems part 2
dispn0ygonekrazy
post Nov 29 2004, 09:59 PM
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i want you to know ill never leave your side
im your protection when you have nowhere to hide
i want you to see your the only one ill ever love
your as special like an angel sent from above
ill be the one that leaves a smile on your face
to cherish to love and to feel your warm embrace
whenever you cry ill awalys be there
to let you know ill always care..

ANOTHER ONE!!
i wanna let you know but im afraid what you'll say
if i wasnt such a coward i wouldnt have stayed away
so many chances but it wouldnt go through
i wanted to tell you that i still love you
being away left a hole in in my heart
i thought i lost everything when we were apart
we're both scared to tell each other how we feel
but ill say it in words and let it reveal
you were the best thing that ever happened to me
i hope you understand that and start to see
i couldnt take another persons heart...
i still held on to yours..and i never left it apart

hahah dayum im srry with the love poems...thats all i can think of right now XD
 
Ekay
post Nov 29 2004, 10:56 PM
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hahahah Now you kno how I feel mang! Never in a bad mood =] Is the second one a sequel-ish thing to the first one? Both are really good. J/W
 
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post Dec 8 2004, 04:49 PM
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awesome job with the poems. they are both really good. the second on is amazing
 

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