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 Nov 10 2004, 04:04 PM
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 LunchboxXx  Group: Member Posts: 1,789 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 16,810  |
recently i've been wanting to die, but i don't want to commit suicide, so i have an idea to keep me alive: the end of the world will be fun to watch and you'll miss it if you're dead.
A BETTER VENGEANCE I want it to rain… I want it to pour… I want it to storm… Hellfire Suicide isn’t the answer A better vengeance is coming Pull the blinds on the sky Nightfall without dawn The zero hour With zero mercy Slaughtered for their sins What a rapturous catastrophe Everyone is dying Everyone is screaming No one appreciated life So it is taken away I can’t wait for Armageddon And it’s not my death I’m looking forward to reserving my front row center for the final abomination hello, peace Hello, purity Hello, virtue Farewell, man Parting with such sweet sorrow |
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Nov 10 2004, 04:11 PM
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 Junkie's Running Dry Group: Member Posts: 317 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 34,797 |
Well, I like the concept.
DOOM! |
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Nov 10 2004, 08:43 PM
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 Will write poetry for sex! Group: Member Posts: 1,110 Joined: Jan 2004 Member No: 600 |
Haha, I like how you chooe to deal with your problem with the chosen perspective in the piece.
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Nov 10 2004, 09:20 PM
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 Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 45 Joined: Sep 2004 Member No: 51,625 |
thank you for that wonderful image, very uplifting
you sound like those tragic goth kids that wear all leather to dances and are too hot to move.. always raving on about death &destruction |
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Nov 11 2004, 03:07 PM
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LunchboxXx Group: Member Posts: 1,789 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 16,810 |
QUOTE(FUNKosaurus @ Nov 10 2004, 9:20 PM) thank you for that wonderful image, very uplifting you sound like those tragic goth kids that wear all leather to dances and are too hot to move.. always raving on about death &destruction hehehe leather does look damn cool  i rave about other stuff too, though. |
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Nov 11 2004, 08:49 PM
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 XOTY*06 :D Group: Member Posts: 2,635 Joined: Mar 2004 Member No: 6,747 |
wow, very deep.
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Nov 14 2004, 05:48 PM
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Brie Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 10,172 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 20,548 |
Ah, man.
I love this one! Nice. [= |
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