eating an egg is like drinking coffee with sugar |
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 Nov 9 2004, 03:14 PM
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 creepy heather  Group: Official Member Posts: 4,208 Joined: Aug 2004 Member No: 41,580  |
Resting on the hinges
Lie dreams that will not be The egg All I knew All I hoped to know Able to be THE PUNISHMENT FOR THESE DREAMS: 30 minutes torture- An hour in the hole-- A life-time of What is left now ? |
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Nov 10 2004, 04:36 AM
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 Will write poetry for sex! Group: Member Posts: 1,110 Joined: Jan 2004 Member No: 600 |
Eh?
Okay, okay. dees hoit mah hed, chu know? Time to overanalyze this...just a little. I asked myself what the egg represents. I worked around the title - drinking coffee with sugar is a...common thing, almost the right way to do it. For some, the normal and only way to see it. So eating an egg is just some bland way of looking at it. Therefore, the egg has another purpose and represents something bigger that no one except yourself can comprehend. Haha, I'm kidding...Just felt like being silly. Very mysterious. Damn our work that was meant for only us to decipher. When I write in that fashion, I'd feel that the person would deserve to know what I was talking about if he/she figured it out...an agen i confoosed. 
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Nov 10 2004, 07:40 AM
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creepy heather Group: Official Member Posts: 4,208 Joined: Aug 2004 Member No: 41,580 |
sorry
 i was rushy when i posted this the title isnt right... coffee may taste sweet with sugar, but the bitterness is still there *shrugs* this poem is about sheltered lives believe it or not we all start out in the egg, our home, our habitat and that is all we know we grow up in this habitat...form dreams and we try to fullfill those dreams, but they involve access to a completely different world that we know....which could make the simplest thing for one person torture to another my own dreams were on my mind when i wrote it x.x its very random kinda sucky....but i like it a little, lol |
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Nov 10 2004, 12:30 PM
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Will write poetry for sex! Group: Member Posts: 1,110 Joined: Jan 2004 Member No: 600 |
QUOTE(Heathasm @ Nov 10 2004, 4:40 AM) my own dreams were on my mind when i wrote it x.x its very random kinda sucky....but i like it a little, lol Yeah, I was thinking either you wrote with a dream in mind or...you were on crack. I was really hoping it was crack. 
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Nov 10 2004, 03:15 PM
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cb=bullshit. Group: Member Posts: 1,783 Joined: Feb 2004 Member No: 3,793 |
 okay! 
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Nov 11 2004, 08:40 PM
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 Feeel X Group: Member Posts: 2,814 Joined: Jan 2004 Member No: 1,498 |
i didn't get it..
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Nov 11 2004, 09:22 PM
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creepy heather Group: Official Member Posts: 4,208 Joined: Aug 2004 Member No: 41,580 |
^^^^
with my poetry i dont usually explain it because it doesnt always make sense to other people id rather them gather up their own theory for what it means...thats just me and how i write |
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Nov 11 2004, 10:01 PM
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 lick me Group: Member Posts: 3,044 Joined: Aug 2004 Member No: 44,013 |
yea, dont have to make sense. =]
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Nov 11 2004, 10:03 PM
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 banned Group: Member Posts: 1,589 Joined: Feb 2004 Member No: 3,768 |
um nice poem!
what about eggs? |
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Nov 11 2004, 10:09 PM
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creepy heather Group: Official Member Posts: 4,208 Joined: Aug 2004 Member No: 41,580 |
wtf?
dont mock me...i already explained ass |
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