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 Nov 8 2004, 01:55 AM
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te quiero  Group: Banned Posts: 2,586 Joined: Apr 2004 Member No: 14,678  |
i can't believe i found this... it was so long ago
Sing me My Song sing me a song with your voice like silver you'll right all my wrongs with your golden touch take me along when you walk by the river then sing me my song that i love so much many a'nights i wait for the tide i wait for the light i wait for my ride fill me with might i'm resisting my pride i've put up a fight so i can be by your side now give me the strength to give you all i can go longer lengths let my feet stay on land bring me a saint all my enemies banned the darkness is faint so lend me your hand chase away devils that haunt me in sleep they've all siezed shovels they've cut me deep reprimend rebels make them all weep they've thrown little pebbles while faith i did keep vengeance, my glory it was all that i had my entire story based on them, who did bad spent my time mourning i knew only sad ignoring the warnings i saw what i lacked but you sang me my song you lay me in sand you righted my wrongs monster waves all were banned you took me along secured me on land then you sang me my song i know i'm safe in your hands |
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Nov 8 2004, 04:17 PM
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 Can't have the hand without the cock. Group: Member Posts: 2,481 Joined: Sep 2004 Member No: 50,622 |
Wow. Sounds like someone really looks out for you.
 QUOTE i'm resisting my pride i've put up a fight Miss Independent eh? 
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Nov 8 2004, 04:22 PM
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te quiero Group: Banned Posts: 2,586 Joined: Apr 2004 Member No: 14,678 |
i'm talking about Jesus Christ in an abstract way....
so i guess you can say someone's looking out for me. |
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Nov 8 2004, 05:01 PM
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Can't have the hand without the cock. Group: Member Posts: 2,481 Joined: Sep 2004 Member No: 50,622 |
QUOTE([X) poised,Nov 8 2004, 4:22 PM] i'm talking about Jesus Christ in an abstract way.... so i guess you can say someone's looking out for me. Ohh duhh.. why didn`t i think of that. QUOTE with your voice like silver you'll right all my wrongs with your golden touch take me along QUOTE so i can be by your side now give me the strength to give you all i can go longer lengths let my feet stay on land bring me a saint all my enemies banned the darkness is faint so lend me your hand chase away devils that haunt me in sleep Well after you told me that, those lines make so much sense to me now. |
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Nov 8 2004, 05:13 PM
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 It's "Rock The CASBAH"! NOT CATWALK! Group: Member Posts: 282 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 34,989 |
THAT'S A REAL CUTE SONG! I like it! I thought it wuz about a dude u liked, but I think it's cute how it's about Jesus . You should put in the end sumthing like, "Jesus Christ, this is what I want from U" or sumthing like that...that would be a cute lil' touch. It's still good the way it is though...GREAT JOB  !
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Nov 9 2004, 08:55 PM
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te quiero Group: Banned Posts: 2,586 Joined: Apr 2004 Member No: 14,678 |
yeeeah, but i'm not looking for a cute "touch". =/
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Nov 9 2004, 08:56 PM
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Can't have the hand without the cock. Group: Member Posts: 2,481 Joined: Sep 2004 Member No: 50,622 |
QUOTE([X) poised,Nov 9 2004, 8:55 PM] yeeeah, but i'm not looking for a cute "touch". =/ Hehe. Did her saying it was "CUTE" offend you? |
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Nov 9 2004, 08:57 PM
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te quiero Group: Banned Posts: 2,586 Joined: Apr 2004 Member No: 14,678 |
QUOTE(jambaJUICE @ Nov 9 2004, 7:56 PM) Hehe. Did her saying it was "CUTE" offend you? yes it did. this poem was not meant to be light-hearted. 
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Nov 13 2004, 03:21 AM
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 hello : ) Group: Official Member Posts: 4,227 Joined: Apr 2004 Member No: 13,139 |
wow. that is really good. like it took me a few times to read it to like fully understand it & to get i guess the full meaning out of it. i really like it. you did an awesome job. =)
i espeically like these few lines: QUOTE fill me with might i'm resisting my pride i've put up a fight so i can be by your side now give me the strength to give you all i can go longer lengths let my feet stay on land again, great job! |
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