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Reminisce
Ekay
post Nov 8 2004, 12:26 AM
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Every time I reminisce
I think about the ways we used to kiss
Baby girl I want you by my side
I’m sorry for all the times that you cried
But I’ll always be here for you now through thick and thin
You don’t have to keep everything within
I’m sorry for all the pain I’ve caused
But now let’s put life on pause
Forget the world baby girl
And let your mind unfurl
Cause now baby it’s only you and me
Can’t you see?
Baby girl you have my everlasting gratitude
Your style, your grace, your beauty and your attitude
You don’t have to change for anyone
Keep that in mind since you’re the only one
That I’ll ever love as much as this
I just want you to be in bliss
I’ll show you love at its perfection…

I forgot to add this a while ago. But I gotta give some credit to my closest friends. He helped me with the rhyming and whatnot.

~Nguyen
 
dreamerOi
post Nov 8 2004, 12:29 AM
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i like the poem. except. baby girl. sorry. that word -_-. makes it a hip hop song or seomthing. but the poem i like it _smile.gif
 
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post Nov 8 2004, 12:30 AM
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hahah It is intended to be a hip hop song. Just to let you kno happy.gif
 
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post Nov 8 2004, 12:32 AM
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hahaa ohhh okay. well then excellent _smile.gif
 
Ekay
post Nov 8 2004, 12:43 AM
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lol thanks
 
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post Nov 8 2004, 12:54 AM
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Aww haha. Well i hope you and you`re Baby Girl have fun in your reminisce.
[if there is one]
 
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post Nov 8 2004, 01:45 AM
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QUOTE(Cloud_X @ Nov 7 2004, 9:30 PM)
hahah It is intended to be a hip hop song. Just to let you kno happy.gif

Ah, then you might as well add 'Mah boo' in there.
 
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post Nov 8 2004, 08:42 PM
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QUOTE(MasteRxKiD @ Nov 8 2004, 1:45 AM)
Ah, then you might as well add 'Mah boo' in there.

hahahah I was going too, but then I realized that I used "My boo" a lil much so I resorted to this biggrin.gif
 

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