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 Nov 4 2004, 11:12 PM
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*Influential Guitarist & Inspiring Writer*  Group: Official Member Posts: 1,217 Joined: Sep 2004 Member No: 51,134  |
my pride and my soul all gone and wasted away
the people i once cared for dont care anymore you ask me why it ended in a way of violence nothing i can say can heal the wounded and the hurt inside you lost faith in me and this it how it ends deprived for what i have done for the sakes of your hapiness nothing in return you've taken me for granted looking like a fool under your spell every trick in the bag you pulled on me decietful, betrayed and the lost of trust i once had you finally notice me and all the sh*t you put me through but its too late to say sorry now i cannot forgive how you pretended to be my friend i cannot forgive how you ran me out and put me to end you ask me why it ended in a violent way this is what i am, what you see, and what you havent noticed for all your greed and that haunting look on your face you've awaken me to come and take your life away running scared like the damn dog you are its over its the end kiss your ass good bye |
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Nov 4 2004, 11:23 PM
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Eternal Syn Group: Member Posts: 398 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 24,000 |
Guessing you're going through a rough time or something. But anyways, it's good, but I can't feel it. It seems like you wrote this w/o putting a little bit of yourself in it. Well that's just my opinion.
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Nov 4 2004, 11:28 PM
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*Influential Guitarist & Inspiring Writer* Group: Official Member Posts: 1,217 Joined: Sep 2004 Member No: 51,134 |
eacto mundo this is random off my head
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Nov 4 2004, 11:35 PM
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Eternal Syn Group: Member Posts: 398 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 24,000 |
Oh, I see, because most of the stuff I write are kinda based on my life and whatnot.
~Nguyen |
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