I'm Sorry |
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I'm Sorry |
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![]() What the fack. ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Official Member Posts: 6,164 Joined: Mar 2004 Member No: 8,519 ![]() |
Hm. I know it's been a long while since I've posted a new poem.
So here it goes. Go easy on me. It's been a while. ![]() I'm Sorry I'm sorry for never being good enough I'm sorry for thinking that I was the girl You were thinking of I'm sorry I smiled at you When you were noticing someone else I'm sorry that you don't know I'm alive And that I can't be anything better than myself I feel sorry For thinking that things would be alright I feel sorry For those wastead tears I spent every night I'm sorry to finally realize That people do in fact move on I'm sorry to miss that look on your face When I had my back to you And you'd already left and gone I'm sorry that a part of me died inside When your happiness ate away my fears I'm sorry that I couldn't stop All those false hopes and tears |
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![]() Will write poetry for sex! ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 1,110 Joined: Jan 2004 Member No: 600 ![]() |
Hrm, Not bad.
I've heard/read poems that were VERY similar. I think you could've gone an extra mile with this one. Good to see more work from you though. |
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