tyler texas, so glam with me |
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tyler texas, so glam with me |
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![]() creepy heather ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Official Member Posts: 4,208 Joined: Aug 2004 Member No: 41,580 ![]() |
I’d like to shoot my city, and place a god in the dump of it
With a broken neck to classify my signature Beneath the harvest moon. I can finally itch, again, the crack across my skull. The eyes, lips, and blood of it all entice me- An embryo for destruction. I was a super star, I lived in the city lights, I idoled my Buddhist charm. Lights in the city. The neck of a crane I bite down on, Giving me the dog-like appearance, Is all I need to be a fascination Underneath the tall, tall, city lights. In the city where I ache, I cannot suffer through my happiness. I scrape my face with terrycloth, Cardboard, every night. And I did know… I Ache it on my own; And me just being is blasphemous. I need more instruction on how to live politely |
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*Influential Guitarist & Inspiring Writer* ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Official Member Posts: 1,217 Joined: Sep 2004 Member No: 51,134 ![]() |
whoah oh this piece i like it alot
"In the city where I ache, I cannot suffer through my happiness. I scrape my face with terrycloth, Cardboard, every night. And I did know… I Ache it on my own; And me just being is blasphemous." that part i really like and it flows nicely from beggining to end great work |
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![]() creepy heather ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Official Member Posts: 4,208 Joined: Aug 2004 Member No: 41,580 ![]() |
QUOTE(dispn0ygonekrazy @ Oct 26 2004, 10:19 PM) whoah oh this piece i like it alot "In the city where I ache, I cannot suffer through my happiness. I scrape my face with terrycloth, Cardboard, every night. And I did know… I Ache it on my own; And me just being is blasphemous." that part i really like and it flows nicely from beggining to end great work thanks ya ![]() |
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