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 Oct 25 2004, 06:42 PM
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*Influential Guitarist & Inspiring Writer*  Group: Official Member Posts: 1,217 Joined: Sep 2004 Member No: 51,134  |
With this ink in our skin we've sealed our fate,
and the axe comes early only naturally So what does that matter? There's a bed of skeletons waiting for me, on the other side They're waiting for my next move, next fatal breath Human lives to me seem so unreal, can't see through the fog (nothing past a grey wall) see past the stereotype Belief, structure built up in you. I'll tear you down and the one who created you If they didn't have One how would they act? If we didn't have hope how would we behave? Would they still feel remorse if they slaughtered innocent beings? Or is hope the only thing that keeps you sane? A good friend once told me we are our memory without it we equal nothing And all I can see is the place I wanna be Timeless my life was so free Leaves at my feet, blown to the ground their echoes are reaching my ears Nights coming fast, suns going down But keep away from me... keep away from me (it's hard, to keep me in this place, keep away from me) We may have created the beginning, mentally We may have created the beginning, physically To the end of our human existence... I see through you The fear that's in your eyes A good friend once told me we are our memory Without it we equal nothing And all I can see is the place I wanna be Timeless my life was so free Leaves at my feet, blown to the ground their echoes are reaching my ears Nights coming fast, suns going down - confused I don't know the answers but neither do you i like this kind of writing |
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Oct 25 2004, 09:15 PM
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 Can't have the hand without the cock. Group: Member Posts: 2,481 Joined: Sep 2004 Member No: 50,622 |
QUOTE(dispn0ygonekrazy @ Oct 25 2004, 6:42 PM) i like this kind of writing  i dont. i hate it.JayKaying  QUOTE We may have created the beginning, mentally We may have created the beginning, physically To the end of our human existence... I see through you The fear that's in your eyes A good friend once told me we are our memory Without it we equal nothing And all I can see is the place I wanna be Timeless my life was so free Leaves at my feet, blown to the ground their echoes are reaching my ears Nights coming fast, suns going down - confused I don't know the answers but neither do you I like that part the best.  
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Oct 26 2004, 07:44 PM
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*Influential Guitarist & Inspiring Writer* Group: Official Member Posts: 1,217 Joined: Sep 2004 Member No: 51,134 |
lol gyea
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Oct 26 2004, 09:57 PM
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Eternal Syn Group: Member Posts: 398 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 24,000 |
Really good mang. When I was reading this, I kinda imagined it as a rap song =P but yeah did you mean to write it as a song?
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Oct 27 2004, 01:13 PM
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SOS Brigade!! Group: Member Posts: 2,573 Joined: Sep 2004 Member No: 47,775 |
Overall its great.. But the meaning of it is lost to me.
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Oct 28 2004, 03:19 PM
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 Will write poetry for sex! Group: Member Posts: 1,110 Joined: Jan 2004 Member No: 600 |
QUOTE(dispn0ygonekrazy @ Oct 25 2004, 3:42 PM) i like this kind of writing So is it written by another author, or were you just mentioning that you enjoy writing in that fashion? |
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