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 Oct 24 2004, 12:37 AM
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Eternal Syn  Group: Member Posts: 398 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 24,000  |
Now that I've had some time to cool down a bit. I can write something other then just a bunch of words put together. This explains what I feel towards my ex. Criticism is accepted.
Behind my eyes Behind my smile Lies a truth… Even though I smile Whenever I see you Even if I look happy to see you I never was I’ve always tried to forget about you Somehow you always seem to pop up in my life Why don’t you ever leave me alone… I…just want to forget… Everything we ever did Everything about you Everything you liked I…just want to forget You |
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Oct 24 2004, 12:43 AM
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 A.K.A. Simplicityxx Group: Member Posts: 1,878 Joined: Oct 2004 Member No: 56,813 |
i think dats good!! i can think of a lot of ppl @ my skool dat feels da same way!!
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Oct 24 2004, 12:43 AM
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 LunchboxXx Group: Member Posts: 1,789 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 16,810 |
that's some hardcore right there. i know how ya feel somtimes. excelent work.
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Oct 24 2004, 12:58 AM
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Eternal Syn Group: Member Posts: 398 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 24,000 |
Thanks guys. I really appreciate the feed back.
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