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 Oct 23 2004, 10:13 AM
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*Influential Guitarist & Inspiring Writer*  Group: Official Member Posts: 1,217 Joined: Sep 2004 Member No: 51,134  |
why is there so much violence and deaths..
violence and the deaths of the young youth for what reason, but a mistaken path they choose seeing the death of a youngin in front of your eyes not knowing what to do nor what to say feelings of hatred flows through your veins its time to end the rule of absolute monarchy decisions made by who we call our tyrant of power brought more sorrow to many of loves ones lives fighting for no reason at all we lose parents for our new generation to come little children growing up without a mother or father in their life sadness comes into their lives with a question why wondering what has happend to mom and dad finding out the truth of what really happend the result is bad children start to build up with sorrow and anger nothing has changed and nothing ever will for what reason, but now we know why without the figure of a mother and father leading the right way its a cycle all over again, the violence of a young youth the loss of a parent, the tyrant of power and the wrong decisions made |
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Oct 23 2004, 10:14 AM
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 Death is a promise given to us at birth Group: Official Designer Posts: 4,757 Joined: Mar 2004 Member No: 7,459 |
wow so strong.
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Oct 24 2004, 12:32 AM
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Eternal Syn Group: Member Posts: 398 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 24,000 |
I don't know what to say really. Except that is strong and moving.
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Oct 24 2004, 02:00 PM
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 Can't have the hand without the cock. Group: Member Posts: 2,481 Joined: Sep 2004 Member No: 50,622 |
Sounds like it could be a BEP song, but 20x better.
 You should record yourself, and put in here. |
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Oct 24 2004, 02:05 PM
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cb=bullshit. Group: Member Posts: 1,783 Joined: Feb 2004 Member No: 3,793 |
umm what's the message you're trying to get across?
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Oct 24 2004, 03:07 PM
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*Influential Guitarist & Inspiring Writer* Group: Official Member Posts: 1,217 Joined: Sep 2004 Member No: 51,134 |
i really dont know what im trying to get across i just felt like i had to write this topic down
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Oct 24 2004, 03:45 PM
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Can't have the hand without the cock. Group: Member Posts: 2,481 Joined: Sep 2004 Member No: 50,622 |
Lol.. i thought it was about a person that as a kid he/she saw lots of loss/hate and was misguided, and then when he/she grew up it continued on.
 BUT HEY !! thats just me. |
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Oct 24 2004, 04:43 PM
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*Influential Guitarist & Inspiring Writer* Group: Official Member Posts: 1,217 Joined: Sep 2004 Member No: 51,134 |
lol close but what im basically trying to say is i think about how a young one grows up without no guidance and misleads to violence and like a cycle going on parents die....not even to see their young one grow up and getting older havent really had a chance to feel that kinda love from a real parent...leaves a hole in the young kids heart yenno what im sayng now lol
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Oct 24 2004, 04:47 PM
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Can't have the hand without the cock. Group: Member Posts: 2,481 Joined: Sep 2004 Member No: 50,622 |
I got ya.
I was close enough. Haha |
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Aug 4 2006, 01:57 AM
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oooh here something I didnt rhyme..wow..lol
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