one of my very few non rhyming poems |
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one of my very few non rhyming poems |
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Eternal Syn ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 398 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 24,000 ![]() |
I don’t understand why I let you go
You were always there for me But I never noticed Perhaps I should’ve paid more attention To someone like you I wish I could’ve said it to you then When you were still at my side I guess I should never take things for granted At least not anymore… |
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![]() Will write poetry for sex! ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 1,110 Joined: Jan 2004 Member No: 600 ![]() |
Words taken straight out the heart of regret...
I like it. It's very honest and straight-forward, with a tone that fits it all very well. |
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![]() creepy heather ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Official Member Posts: 4,208 Joined: Aug 2004 Member No: 41,580 ![]() |
this is very simple, but well put. Its deffinately touching :]
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![]() t3h koolest guy in cB ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 2,194 Joined: Jan 2004 Member No: 513 ![]() |
nice. means something. i like poems like that.
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Eternal Syn ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 398 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 24,000 ![]() |
thanks you guys i really appreciate the feedback.
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*Influential Guitarist & Inspiring Writer* ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Official Member Posts: 1,217 Joined: Sep 2004 Member No: 51,134 ![]() |
ay man good job on this mayn i like it
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