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one of my very few non rhyming poems
Ekay
post Oct 19 2004, 08:01 PM
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I don’t understand why I let you go
You were always there for me
But I never noticed
Perhaps I should’ve paid more attention
To someone like you
I wish I could’ve said it to you then
When you were still at my side
I guess I should never take things for granted
At least not anymore…
 
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post Oct 20 2004, 03:56 PM
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Words taken straight out the heart of regret...
I like it. It's very honest and straight-forward, with a tone that fits it all very well.
 
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post Oct 20 2004, 05:36 PM
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this is very simple, but well put. Its deffinately touching :]
 
wayne
post Oct 20 2004, 06:50 PM
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nice. means something. i like poems like that.
 
Ekay
post Oct 20 2004, 07:22 PM
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thanks you guys i really appreciate the feedback.
 
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post Oct 20 2004, 07:48 PM
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ay man good job on this mayn i like it
 

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