one of my very few non rhyming poems |
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 Oct 19 2004, 08:01 PM
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Eternal Syn  Group: Member Posts: 398 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 24,000  |
I don’t understand why I let you go
You were always there for me But I never noticed Perhaps I should’ve paid more attention To someone like you I wish I could’ve said it to you then When you were still at my side I guess I should never take things for granted At least not anymore… |
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Oct 20 2004, 03:56 PM
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 Will write poetry for sex! Group: Member Posts: 1,110 Joined: Jan 2004 Member No: 600 |
Words taken straight out the heart of regret...
I like it. It's very honest and straight-forward, with a tone that fits it all very well. |
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Oct 20 2004, 05:36 PM
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 creepy heather Group: Official Member Posts: 4,208 Joined: Aug 2004 Member No: 41,580 |
this is very simple, but well put. Its deffinately touching :]
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Oct 20 2004, 06:50 PM
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 t3h koolest guy in cB Group: Member Posts: 2,194 Joined: Jan 2004 Member No: 513 |
nice. means something. i like poems like that.
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Oct 20 2004, 07:22 PM
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Eternal Syn Group: Member Posts: 398 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 24,000 |
thanks you guys i really appreciate the feedback.
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Oct 20 2004, 07:48 PM
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*Influential Guitarist & Inspiring Writer* Group: Official Member Posts: 1,217 Joined: Sep 2004 Member No: 51,134 |
ay man good job on this mayn i like it
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