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Dark Consuming
rainnydaiis
post Oct 16 2004, 12:34 PM
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I tried writing something dark like Joe asked so.. if its mad im sorry.. im not really dark

I let the dark consume me
For it uses all my hate and pain against me
Why is it that I enjoy it here
Where no light and love can pierce
Being able to find joy it has given me
My heart and my senses enjoy it
My eyes turn black to match the darkness
I speard it to others
For this experience is so wonderful
And all they can do is get consumed
 
TheSilenceInDict...
post Oct 16 2004, 05:11 PM
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I don't really sense much anger...
More twisted and dark...basking in one's own pain and misery...etc etc.
Good job, and it's something different from you.
 

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