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 Oct 14 2004, 11:55 PM
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 aiko Nakamura at your service  Group: Member Posts: 1,518 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 18,144  |
yeup its the apology.&of course the past continues haha.
i apologize, for letting those eyes enter mine helping each other see through the smog being able to be the reason you smile your teeth, they belong to a mouse they arent gorgeous but i love them. you might have gone from prince charming, to the hunchback of notredam but what matters? im already entangled in this labrinth, this maze inescapable with traps being exposed by every step making me vulernable& hurt by each second but i keep going knowing theres a chance a chance at the prize but i stop almost every hour to breathe to take a good look at myself making sure i'm hurt but when i'm not i come for more begging for more glass to pierce me and of course when you dont i force it upon myself making you watch the pain &for hoping youll hear my heartfelt screeches, i apologize. |
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Oct 15 2004, 12:00 AM
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 creepy heather Group: Official Member Posts: 4,208 Joined: Aug 2004 Member No: 41,580 |
oh wow, this is great, part of it reminds me of a poem by shakespear that i heard once...good job, this poem seems very unique to me, for an apology
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Oct 15 2004, 12:29 AM
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aiko Nakamura at your service Group: Member Posts: 1,518 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 18,144 |
haha really what poem? and thanks a bundle
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Oct 15 2004, 01:08 AM
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creepy heather Group: Official Member Posts: 4,208 Joined: Aug 2004 Member No: 41,580 |
i cant remember the name
it was on "my so called life" and teacher was reading it lol its kind of about overlooking the flaws and still seeing beauty in the person |
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Oct 15 2004, 01:09 AM
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aiko Nakamura at your service Group: Member Posts: 1,518 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 18,144 |
ohh haha i like it maybe i should chek it out or something haha.
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Oct 15 2004, 03:42 AM
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 Will write poetry for sex! Group: Member Posts: 1,110 Joined: Jan 2004 Member No: 600 |
Yeah, it's very unique...Sort of twisted but with that nice little 'unconditional love' kind of thing going on.
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Oct 15 2004, 05:12 PM
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 Maggot Rocker Group: Member Posts: 396 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 27,016 |
eheh Linda yet agian you force me to look at your writings anywho that is very different lol but oh well ;D its nice keep up the good work.
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Oct 15 2004, 07:06 PM
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aiko Nakamura at your service Group: Member Posts: 1,518 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 18,144 |
haha yea thanks a bunch
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Oct 15 2004, 07:37 PM
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*Influential Guitarist & Inspiring Writer* Group: Official Member Posts: 1,217 Joined: Sep 2004 Member No: 51,134 |
always seems to amaze me....hahah GGOB JOB DREAMOI!! i like every piece of writing you posted so far HOOD JOB IM YOUR #1 FAN lol
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Oct 16 2004, 12:07 AM
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aiko Nakamura at your service Group: Member Posts: 1,518 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 18,144 |
ghaha thank you im your number one fan too
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Oct 16 2004, 12:22 AM
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*Influential Guitarist & Inspiring Writer* Group: Official Member Posts: 1,217 Joined: Sep 2004 Member No: 51,134 |
=D thnx oops i mispelled good with hood so GOOD JOB!! im your number one fan lol
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Oct 16 2004, 01:11 PM
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aiko Nakamura at your service Group: Member Posts: 1,518 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 18,144 |
when i saw the hood i cracked up haha.
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