The Neverending Race, . . |
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 Oct 14 2004, 09:50 PM
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te quiero  Group: Banned Posts: 2,586 Joined: Apr 2004 Member No: 14,678  |
The Neverending Race
-melissa Right foot, Left foot repeat the cycle sprinting down this great big loop Up and Down i'll beat the tickings i'm ahead of this whole group eyes are focused mind is reeling heart is steady, keeping pace gotta keep going gotta keep striving i'm running this never-ending race one foot forward, drop back two miles, i'm running on slick oil i can't move my foot's on idle i'm running with chained coils i'm determined so motivated i move forward with great haste i get dragged back my foot will stumble i'm running this never-ending race slowing down, i see my foe i see her mocking smile i try to hurry, quicken my steps but then i lag a mile i keep going reaching for the end there's a hard look on my face i can't go farther i just can't do it i'm running this never ending race there it is i see it now i'm almost at the finish line reaching out i long to touch it i long the gold cup to be mine i've touched the line, but it bounds back my fingerprints erased, it's too far now, but it beckons me to finish this neverending race. |
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Oct 14 2004, 09:53 PM
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SOS Brigade!! Group: Member Posts: 2,573 Joined: Sep 2004 Member No: 47,775 |
wow i love this poem.. it reminds me of my life =P
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Oct 14 2004, 10:10 PM
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 Will write poetry for sex! Group: Member Posts: 1,110 Joined: Jan 2004 Member No: 600 |
The quick pacing and rhythm really go well with the poems theme of a 'race'
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Oct 16 2004, 07:20 PM
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te quiero Group: Banned Posts: 2,586 Joined: Apr 2004 Member No: 14,678 |
QUOTE(rainnydaiis @ Oct 14 2004, 9:53 PM) wow i love this poem.. it reminds me of my life =P haha. That was what i was relating it to. not your life... mine. 
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Oct 17 2004, 09:58 AM
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SOS Brigade!! Group: Member Posts: 2,573 Joined: Sep 2004 Member No: 47,775 |
QUOTE([X) poised,Oct 16 2004, 4:20 PM] haha. That was what i was relating it to. not your life... mine. fine then  its all good its better when one can relate to something NOW TIME TO JACK IT!!! 
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Sep 20 2006, 07:45 PM
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te quiero Group: Banned Posts: 2,586 Joined: Apr 2004 Member No: 14,678 |
Wow. I was looking for this poem all over my computer last year... I must have deleted it. I was gonna use it for class...
Never in a million years did I think I'd be able to find it on CB!! |
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