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 Oct 13 2004, 10:16 PM
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te quiero  Group: Banned Posts: 2,586 Joined: Apr 2004 Member No: 14,678  |
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-melissa take my hand i'll guide you to a place of wonderment you've never known before follow me run your hand down my whole body give me that chilled sensation part your lips i'll take you with me through this trip to just one different land coming closer i beckon you with just one finger as you linger close behind oh, a ride just a joyride through a place, deep into where we've never gone before light it up those candles that we've saved for so many other nights special night this is the one that you've been waiting for playing chess you are my playpiece and i'll treat you as the pawn you are. follow me.. |
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Oct 13 2004, 10:25 PM
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SOS Brigade!! Group: Member Posts: 2,573 Joined: Sep 2004 Member No: 47,775 |
hmm very interesting =P i loved what you did with the ending =P
keep posting i love your poems they seem... exotic =P |
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Oct 13 2004, 10:31 PM
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te quiero Group: Banned Posts: 2,586 Joined: Apr 2004 Member No: 14,678 |
thank you =]
haha. i love that word, exotic. |
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Oct 13 2004, 10:44 PM
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SOS Brigade!! Group: Member Posts: 2,573 Joined: Sep 2004 Member No: 47,775 |
yes same here... exotic =P
you write very very exotic lolz |
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Oct 13 2004, 10:48 PM
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ooh, me likes. and exotic is an awesome word that does fit.
 great work.
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Oct 13 2004, 11:09 PM
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 wanderlust personified. Group: Official Designer Posts: 7,515 Joined: Jan 2004 Member No: 797 |
oooh, thats sexy.
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Oct 13 2004, 11:12 PM
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 Amberific. Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 12,913 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 29,772 |
QUOTE(xquizit @ Oct 13 2004, 11:09 PM) oooh, thats sexy. Trés sexy. Great poem. I like the imagery in your words. |
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Oct 13 2004, 11:17 PM
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 Will write poetry for sex! Group: Member Posts: 1,110 Joined: Jan 2004 Member No: 600 |
Oh the seduction and lust...
Very cleverly written. |
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Oct 13 2004, 11:21 PM
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te quiero Group: Banned Posts: 2,586 Joined: Apr 2004 Member No: 14,678 |
thanks you guys.
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Oct 15 2004, 12:14 AM
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Eternal Syn Group: Member Posts: 398 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 24,000 |
QUOTE(MasteRxKiD @ Oct 13 2004, 11:17 PM) Oh the seduction and lust... Very cleverly written. completely agree |
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