i hate you, i hate your eyes |
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 Oct 13 2004, 07:58 PM
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te quiero  Group: Banned Posts: 2,586 Joined: Apr 2004 Member No: 14,678  |
(don't make assumptions about what this is about)
i hate your eyes -melissa you make me weaker by the moment with those eyes that pierce like knives you're killing me slowly with your eyes i feel i'll need nine lives those deep black, dark, and probing eyes i detest your defiling stare the ways you look into my soul make it seem like you might care i know you don't and neither do i you disgusting piece of trash if i could i'd throw you out you're infesting, like a rash you're a scar of who i am and who i'll never be i can't tell you how much hate is being thrown to you from me |
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Oct 13 2004, 08:58 PM
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*Influential Guitarist & Inspiring Writer* Group: Official Member Posts: 1,217 Joined: Sep 2004 Member No: 51,134 |
nicely done i wrote something similar relating to ur poem but good job
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Oct 13 2004, 09:07 PM
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 lick me Group: Member Posts: 3,044 Joined: Aug 2004 Member No: 44,013 |
Whoa, a lot of expression there. :)
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