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 Oct 6 2004, 06:44 PM
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*Influential Guitarist & Inspiring Writer*  Group: Official Member Posts: 1,217 Joined: Sep 2004 Member No: 51,134  |
your eyes staring back at me, watching every move i make
deep in side my heart i see, my future blown away i cant live my life this way, after every hit i take i could only hope to be, myself and no one else ive tried so hard to be the one you could run to when your down but now i see it all, go away as i hope for a better day now it all just dies alone, in this broken path i roam and now i see what ive become this monster you dont like taken away our memories we once held when i lost control of myself now i stay alone in this dark place, where i can die here on my own to never see the light again, im trapt in my own prison something i wanted to write but never posted |
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Oct 6 2004, 06:54 PM
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 Can't have the hand without the cock. Group: Member Posts: 2,481 Joined: Sep 2004 Member No: 50,622 |
wow
 . it has a meaning to it, and it flows nicely... did u and a friend have a fight or something?
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Oct 6 2004, 07:23 PM
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*Influential Guitarist & Inspiring Writer* Group: Official Member Posts: 1,217 Joined: Sep 2004 Member No: 51,134 |
naw nothing to do with a friend just something i learned staying here in cB XD thnx to masta joe and mel and sam
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Oct 6 2004, 07:47 PM
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Can't have the hand without the cock. Group: Member Posts: 2,481 Joined: Sep 2004 Member No: 50,622 |
hehe coolios.
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Oct 7 2004, 04:09 AM
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 Will write poetry for sex! Group: Member Posts: 1,110 Joined: Jan 2004 Member No: 600 |
Hey, pretty damn good, Mike.
By far my favorite poem from you. QUOTE thnx to masta joe Hey, no prob. I'm glad I was of any help to your writing. |
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Oct 7 2004, 09:10 AM
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*Influential Guitarist & Inspiring Writer* Group: Official Member Posts: 1,217 Joined: Sep 2004 Member No: 51,134 |
thnx joe had alot of help from the people here if i never have found this area i wouldve been sticking to love poems and rhymes lol so this area in the forumn put a change on me made me see things i didnt think of writing
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Oct 7 2004, 09:12 AM
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SOS Brigade!! Group: Member Posts: 2,573 Joined: Sep 2004 Member No: 47,775 |
hmmm same here =P i havent been writing lately.. school taking up too much time..
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Oct 7 2004, 09:17 AM
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*Influential Guitarist & Inspiring Writer* Group: Official Member Posts: 1,217 Joined: Sep 2004 Member No: 51,134 |
school aint shit lol just do the hw then your ok thats it
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Oct 7 2004, 05:34 PM
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SOS Brigade!! Group: Member Posts: 2,573 Joined: Sep 2004 Member No: 47,775 |
my hw is 25% of my grade... test are 25% and classwork is 50% wtfudge is taht!!
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Oct 7 2004, 08:35 PM
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*Influential Guitarist & Inspiring Writer* Group: Official Member Posts: 1,217 Joined: Sep 2004 Member No: 51,134 |
50% class work lol
mine is 15%class and hw 50%tests and the other percent is like attendance |
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