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 Oct 5 2004, 12:21 PM
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 LunchboxXx  Group: Member Posts: 1,789 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 16,810  |
life sucks. nuff said.
I’D GIVE MY LIFE TO BE DEAD (sample: cemetery man: “I’d give my life to be dead”) Their’s no reason To keep up in this world I need a break For all time Knives in my back And broken pinky swears I’ll watch deteriorate I would give everything I have To be in the dirt, alone I just want it to be over Pummeled by society that brings me down I can’t withstand anymore. I can’t take it anymore I give up! I don’t want to be alive! My salvation resting in my grave, eternal darkness My new best friend I don’t feel well I’m going to bed and hope I DON’T WAKE UP! I JUST WANT IT TO BE OVER! I’d give my life to be dead I’d give my life to be set free I’d give my life to be dead I’d give it all a-f**kin-way! Life will not last and death will take it’s place As secure as the oncoming storm I’m dying to be laid to rest and I don’t resent The lack of my cheek being warm The powers to be have positioned me With a choice to die or comform Th razor, the ticket for a one way trip to My sanctum, asylum, the morgue I’d give my life to be dead I’d give my life to be set free I’d give my life to be dead I’d give it all a-f**kin-way! |
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Oct 5 2004, 01:46 PM
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cb=bullshit. Group: Member Posts: 1,783 Joined: Feb 2004 Member No: 3,793 |
eek [hides] please don't die!!
it gives me a sense of... _________. =] i really don't know... the repetition makes me think it's a song? |
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Oct 5 2004, 02:52 PM
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LunchboxXx Group: Member Posts: 1,789 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 16,810 |
yea it's a song.
i know it's not good. i'm just really sad right now and needed to write a bunch of words accordingly. |
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Oct 5 2004, 04:33 PM
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cb=bullshit. Group: Member Posts: 1,783 Joined: Feb 2004 Member No: 3,793 |
aww don't be sad! all of us writers are here for you!
 
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Oct 5 2004, 05:26 PM
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 don't worry, be happy~ Group: Member Posts: 1,538 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 15,899 |
nice.... the lyrics are good.
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Oct 12 2004, 07:35 PM
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LunchboxXx Group: Member Posts: 1,789 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 16,810 |
more people say somthing about this!
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Oct 12 2004, 07:46 PM
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 Will write poetry for sex! Group: Member Posts: 1,110 Joined: Jan 2004 Member No: 600 |
When I read it, I picture it as lyrics for a post-hardcore, hardcore or metalcore song.
Awesome stuff. |
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