another quick write - 'road' |
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 Oct 3 2004, 04:52 AM
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 Will write poetry for sex!  Group: Member Posts: 1,110 Joined: Jan 2004 Member No: 600  |
Here's a quick write:
--- Walk down the road I crawled on Where emotional convulsions strike up frames of blurred memory Flash through, laughing within autumn air. Skip hand in hand with betrayal, across blood-slicked paths, Moonlight shining doubt upon the desolate landscapes Where my dignity once lay. Save me from the abyss I've slipped into Mouth is shut, yet I hear myself screaming Burning my sanity, leading me towards the bliss of the fallen. -Joe |
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Oct 3 2004, 10:32 AM
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SOS Brigade!! Group: Member Posts: 2,573 Joined: Sep 2004 Member No: 47,775 |
wow... this poem really gets you thinking.. +P because im tryin to find out if there was a secret meaning to it..
good job joe =P |
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Oct 3 2004, 12:19 PM
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 Want fries with that? Group: Member Posts: 692 Joined: Sep 2004 Member No: 50,652 |
*pulls out dictionary* WOW! I'm like...woah! =)
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Oct 3 2004, 03:51 PM
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Will write poetry for sex! Group: Member Posts: 1,110 Joined: Jan 2004 Member No: 600 |
QUOTE(rainnydaiis @ Oct 3 2004, 7:32 AM) wow... this poem really gets you thinking.. +P because im tryin to find out if there was a secret meaning to it.. good job joe =P Yeah, it's a journey through a certain ordeal I've been through, and in the end, describes where the end of the path has lead me to. |
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Oct 5 2004, 05:41 PM
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 don't worry, be happy~ Group: Member Posts: 1,538 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 15,899 |
hmm..... a nice short poem to make people really see and think....
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Oct 5 2004, 10:10 PM
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Will write poetry for sex! Group: Member Posts: 1,110 Joined: Jan 2004 Member No: 600 |
Really? Is that what it did for you? Awesome if it did. Anything in particular that makes you say that? Like, any specific lines, etc?
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