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 Oct 1 2004, 08:44 AM
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*Influential Guitarist & Inspiring Writer*  Group: Official Member Posts: 1,217 Joined: Sep 2004 Member No: 51,134  |
im on my own and finally free
walking a path of a lonesome road nothing to bring but my only dream to find my answer along this path i reign no more holding back time to let go all these harmful feelings that i kept in me whom put me in a losfer of words and brought me this way only to see ive missed out all the important things in life so many years wasted i finally open my eyes to a life of a better day and hope to see for once in my life im finally free i think this is good XD |
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Oct 1 2004, 08:49 AM
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SOS Brigade!! Group: Member Posts: 2,573 Joined: Sep 2004 Member No: 47,775 |
yeah i liked it good job
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Oct 1 2004, 02:30 PM
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 Will write poetry for sex! Group: Member Posts: 1,110 Joined: Jan 2004 Member No: 600 |
Hey, not bad...Good job.
Ah, the thresholds we cross. QUOTE im on my own and finally free walking a path of a lonesome road 
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Oct 1 2004, 11:20 PM
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are you trying to rhyme???? if not ... i like it!!
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