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 Sep 26 2004, 03:32 AM
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*Influential Guitarist & Inspiring Writer*  Group: Official Member Posts: 1,217 Joined: Sep 2004 Member No: 51,134  |
im here to reveal this dark side of me
something terrible, somethig u dont want to see its tooken over me, over my soul feeling helpless i have no control im a monster a horrible beast i invite u to come to my feast to feed on your hatred towards me more and more this is what im going to be something that everyone hates a dark side u can relate wOOt wOOt!! i found my darkside in me!! |
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Sep 27 2004, 03:33 AM
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OOOooooOOOohhh eerie....cool i like it esp the personifcation of the darkness....
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Sep 27 2004, 03:48 AM
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 Will write poetry for sex! Group: Member Posts: 1,110 Joined: Jan 2004 Member No: 600 |
QUOTE(AzNbUbZ @ Sep 27 2004, 3:33 AM) OOOooooOOOohhh eerie....cool i like it esp the personifcation of the darkness.... Erm..There wasn't any personification. I think you have it mixed up or something. QUOTE its tooken over me, over my soul Erm, Mike, the word is 'taken.' Hope that was just a typo. Judging from this poem and that last one, you have quite a bit inside of you when it comes to how you present yourself and self-perception. Which is good - embrace it and keep writing more and more as you continue to question and discover it. |
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Sep 27 2004, 08:38 AM
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*Influential Guitarist & Inspiring Writer* Group: Official Member Posts: 1,217 Joined: Sep 2004 Member No: 51,134 |
yeah i guess im improving eh... i was thinking of the word taken but i couldnt choose between tooken and taken i got lost there lol
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