My Reveille |
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 Sep 26 2004, 12:52 AM
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 creepy heather  Group: Official Member Posts: 4,208 Joined: Aug 2004 Member No: 41,580  |
Every night, before I nod-
hear the tiding sea, Listen to my pillow whisper- Indulge before I sleep... In the morning's..' morrow's- Another piece is gone- My mind-my body-apart; It's as a waning song And when I wake at dawn, I'm not quite sure I see, When taken from my slumbers By my reveille This reveille of silence, sturred by silky kisses; To think i'll ever know What its true existence... |
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Sep 26 2004, 12:55 AM
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SOS Brigade!! Group: Member Posts: 2,573 Joined: Sep 2004 Member No: 47,775 |
wow love the uniquness =P
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Sep 26 2004, 12:58 AM
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creepy heather Group: Official Member Posts: 4,208 Joined: Aug 2004 Member No: 41,580 |
QUOTE(rainnydaiis @ Sep 26 2004, 12:55 AM) wow love the uniquness =P thanks...im pretty sure all of my poems are unique :) |
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Sep 26 2004, 01:21 AM
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 LunchboxXx Group: Member Posts: 1,789 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 16,810 |
but what does it mean!?!?!
nah. i think i got a good idea. good job, yo |
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Sep 26 2004, 01:26 AM
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*Influential Guitarist & Inspiring Writer* Group: Official Member Posts: 1,217 Joined: Sep 2004 Member No: 51,134 |
nicley written i aggree with sam the unqueness is there so touching ....
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Sep 26 2004, 02:25 AM
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creepy heather Group: Official Member Posts: 4,208 Joined: Aug 2004 Member No: 41,580 |
QUOTE(ryfitaDF @ Sep 26 2004, 1:21 AM) but what does it mean!?!?! nah. i think i got a good idea. good job, yo a reveille is a sort of signal that wakes you up in the morning...like an alarm or some thing and every day ya wake up you get a little older lose some of your youth :P |
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Sep 26 2004, 06:05 AM
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Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 51 Joined: Sep 2004 Member No: 51,271 |
wow...very nice. i'm not that talented to come up with anything like that
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