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 Sep 25 2004, 04:49 PM
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*Influential Guitarist & Inspiring Writer*  Group: Official Member Posts: 1,217 Joined: Sep 2004 Member No: 51,134  |
i look in the mirror and see a reflection of me
giving me thoughts i didnt want to see im left in sorrow with nothing to gain remembering those words that gave me this pain everynight u haunt me in my dreams that terrible feeling that makes me run and scream yur that thing that brings chaos in my life yur the one that cuts my world like a knife now im scared with nothing to do except these thoughts in my head that reminds me of u ummm yeah something random |
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Sep 25 2004, 08:27 PM
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 Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 875 Joined: Apr 2004 Member No: 13,841 |
wow, i feel like i can relate to your poem, feels like words right out my mouth. anyway, nicely written
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Sep 25 2004, 11:17 PM
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*Influential Guitarist & Inspiring Writer* Group: Official Member Posts: 1,217 Joined: Sep 2004 Member No: 51,134 |
thnx yay
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Sep 25 2004, 11:31 PM
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 Will write poetry for sex! Group: Member Posts: 1,110 Joined: Jan 2004 Member No: 600 |
Well, you're right, it's not a love poem.
 Anyway, not bad...I like the mysterious outside element...In a lot of cases, people like to debate whether or not the person is truly someone else, or the writer is caught in conflict with him/herself. BTW, you'll want to double check your sig, dude. 
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Sep 25 2004, 11:45 PM
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*Influential Guitarist & Inspiring Writer* Group: Official Member Posts: 1,217 Joined: Sep 2004 Member No: 51,134 |
yeh i mispell things lol
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