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Angel? Binded?
rainnydaiis
post Sep 24 2004, 06:12 PM
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hmm.... this was just a quickie

I was binded in chains, Keeping you from me
until that day, my angel came and set me free
happiness was all I felt
Because of such beauty and elegance making one melt
now i live a happy life
but still wanting you to be my wife
not knowing how special you are
me living on earth,you in heaven, spread apart so far
wondering if your still next to me all the time
asking God when will you let this angel be mine
I'll beg and cry for thats all i can do
until God sends this beautiful angel
and from then it'll just be me and you
 
dispn0ygonekrazy
post Sep 24 2004, 06:27 PM
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another nice one gj
 
rainnydaiis
post Sep 24 2004, 06:31 PM
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HEY I THOUGHT U HAD TO GO AWAY!!

it aint that great.. T.T
 
dispn0ygonekrazy
post Sep 24 2004, 07:14 PM
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i did go away XD but not for long lol but anyways nice poem
 
slurp
post Sep 25 2004, 08:32 PM
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aw sweet poem, nicely written =)
 

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