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rainnydaiis
post Sep 23 2004, 10:29 PM
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Hehe wrote this in like 2 minutes.. sorry for the badness but yeah happy mood<3

BWAHAHA <33

Will you be mine
this thought i thought so many times
but now i know how to feel
this love you give me is so surreal
how i want to live life
knowing we'll both share our pain and strife
just only us two
I LOVE YOU
 
SarahxJoy
post Sep 23 2004, 10:38 PM
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What the fack.
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Quick, and to the point, with a gentle touch. Very cool. I haven't seen many good short poems like this. flowers.gif
 
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post Sep 23 2004, 10:40 PM
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lolz.. i suck at writing i just speak freely and use easy rhymes just to get to the point =P
 
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post Sep 23 2004, 10:51 PM
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awww 귀엽다 sam!!!!
 
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post Sep 23 2004, 10:59 PM
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keke 제멛다 did i spell it write ? lolz im lost
 
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post Oct 5 2004, 05:44 PM
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that's such a sweet little poem!!
 
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post Oct 12 2004, 12:30 AM
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it might be short but its a cute poem _smile.gif
 
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post Oct 12 2004, 07:12 AM
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Aww. I love you too :) Haha.
Itd be a great love letter, consider it x]
 
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post Oct 12 2004, 08:40 AM
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thanks =P
 
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post Oct 12 2004, 08:47 AM
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hahah sam....nice short poem...yur the one telling me to be different...bah u too dammit lol
 
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post Oct 12 2004, 05:42 PM
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this poem is actually old...
 
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post Oct 12 2004, 05:54 PM
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Cute...
I kinda stumbled at the first part where it goes
QUOTE
this thought i thought so many times
but know i know how to feel

The repetition of recycled words made me go huh.gif

BTW, I add every new poem to that big post I made.
 
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post Oct 12 2004, 07:43 PM
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yea this is old..
and its suppose to be now i know
=P sorry ill correct it now
 
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post Oct 12 2004, 07:47 PM
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Oooh, okay. Yeah, much better now.
 
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post Oct 12 2004, 07:48 PM
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haha old writes... i look back and go like dam... i didnt improve at all =P
 
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post Oct 12 2004, 07:48 PM
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awesome
 
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post Oct 12 2004, 07:51 PM
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thanks =P
 
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post Oct 12 2004, 08:20 PM
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oph damn didnt realize it was old
 
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post Jan 29 2007, 02:28 AM
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i love this poem a lot honey.
i wonder who you wrote it too.
but you said you didnt write it for someone F3
lol^^;

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